*~! Just A Quick Little Rhyme Thing !~*
 

Im bored so ill just make up a rhyme as i go along lol:

Im ready for the violence, im ready for war/
Ill leave holes in your chest like its connect 4/
No joke soft thing, strictly hardcore/
Get merked, get hurt, get left on the floor/
And if you step on my shoes, you'll get billed like zoots/
And if you talk to much, you'll get strapped like boots/
So i suggest you keep quiet if you've got jack shit to state/
Best hurry up, and run along before its too late/


Ah fuck it, ill add some more later.

:gfy: Holla :gfy:

This was ok.....structure was alright, just try to fix up some of the bars so they are even or close to it though.....probably could have used some multies in this to make it better...flow was alright in it i thought.....alright for a keystyle...but keep at it.

....^..This guy is just too nice...this was far from okay!...this was very very WACK!...