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Fo-Real Vs. Iceman187
yo you set up da battle wrong so i'm settin up you already stated the rules but its blind spit so i'll go soon alright check inn peace
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yo yo yo....Iceman Shit i'm ICE COLD
yo krakka you reminden me of overwieght breakdancers cuz you aint makin moves, just takin abuse from newbies who be makin u lose, who's rhymes are so infernal like heat from da fatastic four so much hotter, one punch from me leave ya cracka ass lookin like glasses of water, i'm comin in hurr lockin up your keystyles, leave ya looking helpless against noobs in battle freestyles, leavin ya burned internally from the inside out, cuz thats what i'ma about, killin kids who reply to a noobs shoutout, so just brreeatthhee and accept what you reading, feed off a my shit unless you can't type cuz your face is bleeding, cuz just my PRESENTS is like lil bois UNRAPPEN you on christmas mornin, the realest rhymes arnt borin, ice boi gonna leave the resta yall snorrin, so i'm hoppin ya raps don't come off like lepers limbs at football games, just so easy, like meltin icecubes with blow torch flames BE EASY |
my insanley gifted flow, ripps you faggot to shreds wit so much lyrical force//
for sure, im hot and your just average, you aint sick, your flows just hoarse// KRAKKA? you qoutin eminem, well your heros a racist according to SOURCE// but i can tell your white and you hate blacks of course// im the type to kill your type, pullin a drive by at 120 miles out of a porcshe// Son, dont fuck wit me, cus unless you got a lerprechaun, you got no luck wit me// im like ali, your flows cant hit me, you must be hooked on crack worse than whitney// and my lyrical flows will send deadly blows to your nose till you fall to your toes// your too slow, you wouldnt beat me if i was 400 lbs runnin through 10 inch snow// so give it up you got no flow, like retards runnin in circles, you got nowhere to go/ you should have never responded to my response, should have just said NO// cus if you were smart you would know, wins arent awarded for no shows // |
my structure was fine when i typed it dammit! uppin 1...........................
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heres my review
Um ice man had better flow --vocab---personals and structure (but u still need 2 work on all of it ) 4-real-----------you need alot of help you got the punch cat..but thats about all your shit is 2 simplistic--and ya vocab is lame---step it up son vote---ice man plz return tha favor ---and vote on cata_strophix vs Sublime D in Front lines |
ice getz it fro wa he said^^^^
nice punches.....nice usage of punches.....good vocab.....n nice flo dun even wrry bout ya structure---cuz ur punches let it slide good shyt by both.... punches: ice flow: cie strucure: none mutliz:.... personalz: ice vote: ice hti dis battle up....cuz i took time doin dis.......good lookz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107171 |
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the way i see it iceman takes this because fo-real had really elementary ryhmes like i mean you attempted some metas but they fell flat you gotta get more creative just like think about shit and then recite it to yourself then be like if i read that would i think it was dope....and if you do that already then figure out what dope is......
iceman you need to work on vocab too your drops are like hella multied and you just ryhem random words it seems... i onno either way vote iceman.... |
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vote ice man for basically every reason stated above
v- iceman return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107487 |
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finall upp[in................................................ .................................................. ...
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ive got to give it to ice, his verse was jus put together better, with better vocab and harder punches, and smoother flow... Fo real, need to put more thought into it... really basic .... so vote=iceman
return the favour.... |
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