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CarsonJet -v- lil jon
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u expect me 2 take u seriously,
the luk on ur face shows ur terified of me, im like a kettle boilin up ready to spill my guts, my rhymes will leave u wid scarz and cut, ur just tossin wid ur self ur beta off wid a dick in ur hand, coz wid lyrcis like dat you'll get band, im da freestlye kind,my lyrical potensial will neva colide, coz wen god created earth guess who brush him aside, il show justice for dis fuked up dawg wid no atitude, my rhymes are biblical miricals so u beta show gratitude, my lyrics are like thunder full of battle rage, u think u got a "chance"? bring ur arse on stage, i stoll dis battle from u,im a battle criminal can u feel my rift, ill neva stop spitin' wid dis rappin' gift! |
lil jon
How herbish can u really get...he call's himself lil jon newbie spawn, messin wit Jet, U couldnt fertilize my lawn Get it right son...Me -v- U bring's blood into the equation special occasions? any day..I'll take what mother gave-em Some one save him...He actually wants to try an spit first... witta weak verse Only chance jon has is speed-dial on nurse Exposed...lil john's just a white male"220 probly surcimsized Drie your eyes...jon What u expect from a sig reppin "the franchise" It was a mistake from beggining...U left ur call-out wide open Now I leave u the same...U better start Groppin on Token..... |
One sided..
Carson takes most catergorys with ease.. more witty punches.. nothing too played.. Lil Jon.. alot of ya verse was self-gratification, when it could'a been used as an effective punch maybe.. basically outclassed by Carson in every aspect.. Vote - CarsonJetX2 Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107358 |
LOL~Good battle fellas..surprisingly for a Newbee..liljon held his own..
Breakdown.. Personals-Car. Punches-Car.(second line very clever) Multis-tie Structure-Car. Flow-Car. Meta-tie. ..once again this was a decent battle..but..CarsonJet came out ahead by a little..peace.. ~Go here and win a million Dollars~Hoo~ray~~~~~ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...04&page=1&pp=15 |
^^^^ exactly.....
carson had nice strait up punches...tite flow......n good structrure lil jon- keep elevatin.......ur punches were ok....but didnt hit hard....they were kinda week,,,ur structure waz good but u g2 werk on personalz n punches punches: carson flow: carson personalz: carson datz wa i think iz most important......so carson takes dis battle plze hit dis battle up.....so it culd close...thnxx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106644 |
iight...
good spit for a newb from lil jon... really would change ur name dawg... or the 'Robin Hood' punches will start comin in... quite good verse from you... not bad structure... dont talk about yourself... punch him more... carson had a tight flow and structure... good punches... and it makes me laugh... as ever... not a merk... not close... somewhere in the middle... vote - CarsonJetX2 OUT |
carson tkes this easily, his punches were just too complex, and hard hitting for lil jon to even come close!!!!!!!!!!!!
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