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MichaelMadness 01-16-04 02:01 PM

CarsonJet Vs. Michael madness
 
Ight Heres the fuckin deal,
10-15 Lines,you post first, I'll post around 6:30 when I get back home,
No hate votes,
No crew Votes..
Lets fuckin do this

MichaelMadness 01-16-04 02:02 PM

Oh yehh. check in first.......But make sure yer ish is posted by 6:30

The Jett 01-16-04 02:05 PM

ha ha LMFAO....
check'd in...................................
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The Jett 01-16-04 03:19 PM

Michael madness...

Yo this thread's a joke! I swear it wasnt even Jet's Idea...
Michael's jus angry cus I voted against when merk was clear
So filled wit fear...I'll even drop 3 hours early on this bird
punches thrown...He miss's..while mine leave his vision Blurred
Notha merk's Brewing...It's like I'm conducting my own Hops...
Forget the spit..Jus call em HALLS way i cough an ne he drops.
Veiwed his past and avi, an lemme tell you..Micheal honestly Blows..
I'd call him a girl But that's an insult to the Y chromozones
Reppin sum no name city like he's from the inner peice NYC...
Can't u see?...Ur fake, U whine, an ur a bitch...Now feel Defeat

MichaelMadness 01-16-04 06:13 PM

I'll admit, out of all my battles Your flows been The hardest yet /
But this still won't stop me from crashin "Carson Jet"/(Do it like a terrorist..)
The Bar has been set, By your Victorious Threads /
But I'm Gonna Lift the bar off the bench, n' leave u strugglin to pick it up off ya chest /
I ain't filled w/ fear , Admit u were the 1 scared the moment the curtains drew /
You don't want me to go all out, Cuz if I did I'd end up hurtin you / This persons thru /
Cuz already the only merk thats brewin... is me merkin you / You deserve to lose,
For the simple fact that u think yer # 1 on the list
Only #1 thing you is, is The # 1 bitch /
you say I honestly blow if so, then you honestly suck dick /
Son Stays battlin newbies so he can say hes Won n 'shit ,
Why else would you be in the front lines when yer records, 21-6 /
Your tryin to accomplish this win, but so far your losin to "I"/Hes bout to lose so hes losin his mind / posted 3 hours early cuz he had nuttin better to do w/ his time / remember I challenged you, I wouldnt rhyme If i knew i was to be beat /
all I feel is victory, you can keep the defeat you were giving to me /

Ight lets get some votes up

MichaelMadness 01-16-04 06:14 PM

Whoaa , The structure is all different then how it was in the post box, it was 15 ligit lines in there.

Daz 01-16-04 06:38 PM

dont matter...u won anyway..ive seen carson drop alot better..i dont kno what happened here..

v-Micheal Madness

unexplained vote discounted.

The Jett 01-16-04 07:02 PM

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Chris Black 01-16-04 07:32 PM

v/madness...barely

Madness, feeding was gay as fuck...
You sould never feed in a text battle...
Mad still got it though, because of other personals and punches, besides the biting...

I dont have enough posts to poll vote, but, ehh...it ups the thread at least...

Please peep my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107351

-W1

Chris Black 01-16-04 07:34 PM

"biting"- I meant to say feeding...........

-W1

Daz 01-16-04 07:36 PM

ok lemme explain the vote since carson wants to im me and cry about it..

Yo this thread's a joke! I swear it wasnt even Jet's Idea...
Michael's jus angry cus I voted against when merk was clear
^^ok
So filled wit fear...I'll even drop 3 hours early on this bird
punches thrown...He miss's..while mine leave his vision Blurred
^^above average
Notha merk's Brewing...It's like I'm conducting my own Hops...
Forget the spit..Jus call em HALLS way i cough an ne he drops.
aight^^
Veiwed his past and avi, an lemme tell you..Micheal honestly Blows..
I'd call him a girl But that's an insult to the Y chromozones
nah^^
Reppin sum no name city like he's from the inner peice NYC...
Can't u see?...Ur fake, U whine, an ur a bitch...Now feel Defeat
^^from what ive seen...hypocrit..and nah

now for MM's
I'll admit, out of all my battles Your flows been The hardest yet /
But this still won't stop me from crashin "Carson Jet"/(Do it like a terrorist..)
The Bar has been set, By your Victorious Threads /
But I'm Gonna Lift the bar off the bench, n' leave u strugglin to pick it up off ya chest /
^^made me laugh...nice
I ain't filled w/ fear , Admit u were the 1 scared the moment the curtains drew /
You don't want me to go all out, Cuz if I did I'd end up hurtin you / This persons thru /
Cuz already the only merk thats brewin... is me merkin you /
aight^^
You deserve to lose,
For the simple fact that u think yer # 1 on the list
Only #1 thing you is, is The # 1 bitch /
you say I honestly blow if so, then you honestly suck dick /
NO...NOT EVER^^
you say I honestly blow if so, then you honestly suck dick /
Son Stays battlin newbies so he can say hes Won n 'shit ,
Why else would you be in the front lines when yer records, 21-6 /
Your tryin to accomplish this win, but so far your losin to "I"/Hes bout to lose so hes losin his mind / posted 3 hours early cuz he had nuttin better to do w/ his time / remember I challenged you, I wouldnt rhyme If i knew i was to be beat /
all I feel is victory, you can keep the defeat you were giving to me
stopped being good at 21-6..everything below is wack..

like i said da first time..mediocre verse for carsonjet..use to kinda respect him until he came to me havin a heart attack about me voting for micheal madness..not a hate vote so dont go running off to get this takin awya too..HONEST VOTE>>

v-MM

The Jett 01-16-04 08:10 PM

^^lol Herb....UPPIN (2).........................
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Daz 01-16-04 08:13 PM

w/e go to hell..at least im not bitchin over a vote

Straight Ace 01-16-04 08:21 PM

CarsonJet
Not up to your usual standards..
Some weird 'rhymin points'..& not the usual creativity.
..Still with like..80% of your full capacity..
You managed to squeeze out some witty lines..
Ok punches..could've been better overall..
I guess you little underestimated your opponent?

Madness
..regardless the reply box, ur structure is still fucked..
w/e.. you had nice lines, problem is..they arent punches..
You hardly even actually insulted him..or threw a punch,
directly towards him..it cudve been vs anyone..
So work on that , personals & overall more complexity.
..Not bad though..

still..

vote CarsonJet

Wise Ways 01-16-04 08:27 PM

Uhh tha feeding killed it....Mike why'd you do it... thats like gay as hell

even though you did feed carson still got punches... tha avy chromozones... and tha halls<--- nice

flow.... definatly carson..... Mike ya verse was stretched cuz of your newbieish habits of putting multies in

wordplay.... carson.....they were hard personals mike could do nothing about...

so

V/ Jet

hit this up with an honest vote...... thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107470


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