Hell at the Gates
 

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Sin...
i lament over past decisions
that elevated dissension and amplified discord
unwarranted emissions from my mouth caused rancor
i stand in blatant remission in front of my Lord

I repent on my knees wishin
and beggin for mercy, on my sinful soul of sorrow and woe
Almost as quick to lie in speech as i was with a hoe
i committed seven of ten, many the world will never know

I resent myself in the precinct snitchin
givin my boys up..when i was the cook in the devil's kitchen
concoting recipes for disaster and pain
satisfying my salivating desire of personal gain

My present contempt for my past is the same for my future
i see burning precipice and fire right and left
it's too late to atone..of time im bereft
i see, gnashing of teeth, and ripping of flesh
a soul encased in bones enduring pain with no rest

I relent my voracious requests of amnesty
all of my life i see now was a travesty
like a deer in headlights, lame to avoid the rhapsody
a pinnacle of existence, the height of life...yet equidistant
from my central orgin the straight path of being
displaced from the path to salvation
disrupted and diverted by sins and temptations
i have squandered my chance to be saved
so i now will feel the wrath of Michealangelo's Blade
Amen...

yo this is a deep spit son im really feelin the topic as well as your vocab on this nice structure son keep postin

I appreiciate the kudos...Hopefully i will be able to reciprocate it one day

..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace..

thanks..i didn't think it was that good, but i appreciate the love..

yo, what you did here is a dope piece. seems like you put your heart to it and i respect that. keep it comin.

number one...Bruklor i don't appreciate the disrespect..i could care less about the post number..but im not a freeposter, and you didn't even give me the courteousy of warning...that i was freeposting and that you were gonna delete post....anyway...im upping this piece, and im gonna respond to abotu 20..so im not a reply hog...gotta set an example

omg, that was strong, thatz the only wd that eXplains how i feel about that
and it makes u think
damn boy u have alot of talent write'n like that


a review from someone not on the site

LucentVisionz[3:37 PM]: honestly i think it's a lil pretentious