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PerpetuILL 01-16-04 03:57 PM

SyaNidal Vs Remedial Rhymer
 
10 lines
no hate
no crew
no d/rers
no feed
no bite
no recycle

You spit first

Good luck....
Pz...

PerpetuILL 01-16-04 04:15 PM

yo checking in............
les go wit ya verse kid....

PerpetuILL 01-16-04 04:15 PM

o yeah 25mins to spit afta you check in ....
Pz....

Remedial Rhymer 01-16-04 04:22 PM

SyaNidal looked for ill rhymes..call him doctor rhymer..
'Cause he found remedial ones..calls them his one-liners..
This name may be an alias..this names probably from a lender..
Hides his real name to ask question in the wackness emergency center..
Why do you need to post all the rules??..this kid really is lame..
"no d/rers"..yet this fuckin' kid maintains to ride his own name..
I try to adress the serious..yes I am just like the president..
No I'm not hesitant..I'll go ahead and drop bombs on you residence..
Fuck it..this battle was over before it was started..
And no it's not cool to lose to the kid thats retarded..

Remedial Rhymer 01-16-04 04:29 PM

3rd line down..apologizes when i said this..it was meant to be his..i was looking at his sigg..~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~

Remedial Rhymer 01-16-04 04:54 PM

hey....are you going to drop anytime soon~!~~~~~~~!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PerpetuILL 01-16-04 05:07 PM

my bad dawg i wus browsin other forums Ill drop now...

PerpetuILL 01-16-04 05:16 PM

this kid states no info. becauz he's non existant,
I rip you like paper, and i have no need for Asistants,
yo remedial ya need elevate and improve ya lines,(remedial means correct or improve)
leave ya pricked like needles pussy... they are pine, (pine tree needles)
ya get merked in this battle n ya try n say ya fine,
you coudlnt serve me at wendys where i go to dine,
i leave you lookin udmb with my sick punlines,
a punch form you is rare, like archeoligal finds,
and now that your merked ive lost everyones attention,
cauz im servin this kid like his name wus detention....

Born To Kill 01-16-04 05:22 PM

Both displayed whackness...

Both displayed some witty wordplay and the ability to punch.

Gonna give this close as fuck battle to Remedial.

I think he got the personals, that "ride ya own name" was pretty tight.

Sy came weak and forced (pine needles?) a couple of times...

Remidial came whack (president/resdence?) a couple of times.

I'll throw it to the closer and I think Rem came a bit more wittier especially since the wordplay involved his own name.

Real close...

Peace

Remedial Rhymer 01-16-04 06:46 PM

lol...i keyed it quickly...it was suposed to say residence..and yes that was wack..lol...upping for more..

SyaNidal 01-16-04 10:03 PM

uppin 1 lets get some votes
drop a link n ill vote on yours...
Pz....

PerpetuILL 01-17-04 11:28 AM

uppin #2 cmon people we need votes.....
leave a link n ill reutrn the favor wit an honest vote....
Pz....

SyaNidal 01-17-04 04:06 PM

uppin 3
cmon people we need votes.....
leave a link n ill reutrn the favor wit an honest vote....
Pz....

SyaNidal 01-17-04 09:55 PM

uppin 4
cmon people we need votes.....
leave a link n ill reutrn the favor wit an honest vote....
Pz....

Sp1TGa1M 01-17-04 10:12 PM

I don't know who got this one.......Close one Tho.....both of the verse were kinda equal...


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