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TheUnderRated vs Straight Ace
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10-14 lines No hate,crew,herb other bs votes.. 30-45 min deadline.. Blind spits.. Check Ins & state who goes 1st.. |
checkin its blindspits so we spit at the same time pm when your done with yours cool
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expert in a field and on a track yet you lost the long distance race...
look at his avy bitch is too embarrased to even show his whole face.... eyein me accepted my callout we can get it on son just listen... you r gonna get fucked in this battle but i'll let u pick the preposition... no matter how hard you try to leave me slutted you'll never concieve.. get a deck o cards tatted on your forearm still no ace up your sleeve... prolly won 9 cause you dazzle herbs eyes with multis in every line.. you wanna spitshine your rhyme so u open your mind and kick like 6 sometime.. that ain't my style call me holyfield i'm bout punchin in the title bout.. play off played concepts and scripts and prepare to get knocked out.. straight Ace as if the sexuallity is some sort of a question mark an unknown... your runnin out of paper so hit up my rhyme bank if u ever need a loan... |
Insisted on blind spits,coverd up for personals..hide what u lack..
..But its certain ill break the tie....Like when its around your neck.. Bars carefully balanced..& selected..to fit this merk of the week.. ..Underrated i heared you bit wack lyrics? u are what you eat.. Shud be elevated or elite i school this kid & waste these herbs.. Dispatchin' ur dictionairy is the only way u got 'a way' wit words.. I'm battlin a no one & no one is perfect...so i guess thats a lie.. & those 5 uppings..wont make ur verse better..regardless the try.. ..Im fiend,like a demon hauntin your soul..constantly on ur mind.. ...Kids all talk & no action like............ adult movies for the blind.. Overall lookin' i included 2 filler lines, those bein flaws,you see ? But you should worry..in contradiction.. ...................to that last replied piece..6 forums down in poetry.. two lines where switched in my original reply |
vote ace...liked his punches alot more..good use of wordplay as usual and good use of multies..formatted nicely...underrated had suim nice punches but i think ace did him in on this..
that ain't my style call me holyfield i'm bout punchin in the title bout.. play off played concepts and scripts and prepare to get knocked out.. best underrated lines^^ Bars carefully balanced..& selected..to fit this merk of the week.. ..Underrated i heared you bit wack lyrics? u are what you eat.. Shud be elevated or elite i school this kid & waste these herbs.. Dispatchin' ur dictionairy is the only way u got 'a way' wit words.. best ace line^^ |
Pretty good battle in my eyes....
punches goes to Ace...liked tha upping line and tha blind on....Under you had good punches too... just not as consistant flow...Ace.. his lines were shorter and to tha point.. with nicer structure wordplay...Under got this.. his verse just had more wordplay... so V/ Ace hit this up with an honest vote......thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107316&page=2 |
alright not feelin my punches as much shit happens right it was a good battle lets get some more votes no hate ....drop a link i'll do what i can....
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v/ace
His punches hit harder throughout the verse... But the "no on is perfect line" has been used over and over... Not saying you bit but i've seen it more that 5 times.... Anyway, ace still got it... Sorry fellas but I cant poll vote yet... Please peep my battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107351 -W1 |
um....i guess im da only 2 votin 4 Ur....
madddd nicee battle..... good verses 4 both...both of yall lacked nothing..... mah vote goez 2 UR 4 nice disses everything 4 yall waz da same vote: UR good lookz....hit dis battle up......n propz 2 both http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106822 |
Both came tough in my opinion,.....Metas Were a tie..........Straight Ace had tha Punches......Wordplay....and Flow...........Underated had better Vocab........Overall~hmm.......I'ma have to say Straight Ace....He Had lots of Potential and Aimed straight at his opponent...
Vote~Straight Ace |
Under
expert in a field and on a track yet you lost the long distance race... look at his avy bitch is too embarrased to even show his whole face.... Not really feeling it...just ok eyein me accepted my callout we can get it on son just listen... you r gonna get fucked in this battle but i'll let u pick the preposition... Not a great punch no matter how hard you try to leave me slutted you'll never concieve.. get a deck o cards tatted on your forearm still no ace up your sleeve... Good punch wit word play prolly won 9 cause you dazzle herbs eyes with multis in every line.. you wanna spitshine your rhyme so u open your mind and kick like 6 sometime.. Blah...personals off wins are played these days that ain't my style call me holyfield i'm bout punchin in the title bout.. play off played concepts and scripts and prepare to get knocked out.. Decent straight Ace as if the sexuallity is some sort of a question mark an unknown... your runnin out of paper so hit up my rhyme bank if u ever need a loan... Decent closer Ace Insisted on blind spits,coverd up for personals..hide what u lack.. ..But its certain ill break the tie....Like when its around your neck.. Decent Bars carefully balanced..& selected..to fit this merk of the week.. ..Underrated i heared you bit wack lyrics? u are what you eat.. lol...good punch, nice the way u flipped it Shud be elevated or elite i school this kid & waste these herbs.. Dispatchin' ur dictionairy is the only way u got 'a way' wit words.. Not bad I'm battlin a no one & no one is perfect...so i guess thats a lie.. & those 5 uppings..wont make ur verse better..regardless the try.. lol....nice concept ..Im fiend,like a demon hauntin your soul..constantly on ur mind.. ...Kids all talk & no action like............ adult movies for the blind.. Ha....another nice punch Overall lookin' i included 2 filler lines, those bein flaws,you see ? But you should worry..in contradiction.. ...................to that last replied piece..6 forums down in poetry.. Good ending Overall - Straight Ace Took This Wit His Harder, More Witty Punches Im'a try to get 100 posts on this alias tonight, if i dont ill come back and vote wit my other name |
punches- Ace(harder to the point.....Under was all over the place here)
flo- Ace(Under was still to long wit his lines......stretched) wordplay- Ace(both had some....but that dictionary line was better) multi's- Ace(simply he had a better quality of such) meti4's- Under(he had meatier ones....much more into his...good concpet) overall- Ace......Under said it himself...not his best....not Ace's best either...but its nice to see skill's go against skill's.....Under ur slumpin....pick it up |
...Appreciate all the votes..
......1th uppin.. Let close this.. |
Under expert in a field and on a track yet you lost the long distance race... look at his avy bitch is too embarrased to even show his whole face.... Not really feeling it...just ok eyein me accepted my callout we can get it on son just listen... you r gonna get fucked in this battle but i'll let u pick the preposition... Not a great punch no matter how hard you try to leave me slutted you'll never concieve.. get a deck o cards tatted on your forearm still no ace up your sleeve... Good punch wit word play prolly won 9 cause you dazzle herbs eyes with multis in every line.. you wanna spitshine your rhyme so u open your mind and kick like 6 sometime.. Blah...personals off wins are played these days that ain't my style call me holyfield i'm bout punchin in the title bout.. play off played concepts and scripts and prepare to get knocked out.. Decent straight Ace as if the sexuallity is some sort of a question mark an unknown... your runnin out of paper so hit up my rhyme bank if u ever need a loan... Decent closer Ace Insisted on blind spits,coverd up for personals..hide what u lack.. ..But its certain ill break the tie....Like when its around your neck.. Decent Bars carefully balanced..& selected..to fit this merk of the week.. ..Underrated i heared you bit wack lyrics? u are what you eat.. lol...good punch, nice the way u flipped it Shud be elevated or elite i school this kid & waste these herbs.. Dispatchin' ur dictionairy is the only way u got 'a way' wit words.. Not bad I'm battlin a no one & no one is perfect...so i guess thats a lie.. & those 5 uppings..wont make ur verse better..regardless the try.. lol....nice concept ..Im fiend,like a demon hauntin your soul..constantly on ur mind.. ...Kids all talk & no action like............ adult movies for the blind.. Ha....another nice punch Overall lookin' i included 2 filler lines, those bein flaws,you see ? But you should worry..in contradiction.. ...................to that last replied piece..6 forums down in poetry.. Good ending Overall - Straight Ace Took This Wit His Harder, More Witty Punches Im'a try to get 100 posts on this alias tonight, if i dont ill come back and vote wit my other name Blah....fuck alias 100 posts |
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