All U Got ( hot shit so peep!)
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...965#post1095965

Verse 1:
It must be amazin grace, dat keepz me laced wit dis lyrical taste
itz like a race so keep ur pace, men get played an turned cake
1 more word an ill leave mutha fuckaz astoned an disturbed
a con of da worst, bitches luv me from da block 2 da burbz
niggaz of all agez bow down 2 me cause im never unheard
neva faded or blured from da game 2 wich i paved an gave birth
depraved younginz look up 2 me luvin it when i put dis shit down
spit outloud at massive croudz, was once lost but now found
now dat dese bitches have witnessed it, just gimmie da crown
king of hip hopz sound, da town circus, alwayz ready 2 clown
hold down da spot, while nigaz flop in minutez i feel it an drop
da modest rhyme product, mopin MCs up nightly, im all u got

Chorus:
niggaz iz wait'in impactient 4rm 106th n Park 2 da Basement
(im all u got!)
plus im immune 2 da laced shit, itz no worst den a face hit
(im all u got!)
u cant erase or replace me, dodge harsh times like da Matrix
(im all u got!)
niggaz iz fake'n like de da shit, but im da greatest letz face it...
....Im all u got!

Verse 2:
Wherez da fun n runnin 4rm bitch niggaz when i can jus b rippin ya
lick ya in any givin minute ta spit it efficiantz my fuckin signature
mixed ya up wit dese bitch niggaz who try'd de handz in twistin ya
dropin shit like a pigon, singin wit preficience, a profesional whistla
but now itz my turn it might burn, 4 a couple of verses it getz slower
i know but stay low an i might not take ur head off ur shoulderz
on ya like a drug keep ya up longer den sum X an a cup Foulderz
ya could say itz a warzone on stage cause im feelin bomb an sober
my mindz focust on da task at hand, itz a rough ride so fasten up
a couple wide turnz an bumpz, if ur lucky u want leave casted up
fuck flamez i spit Molotav Cocktailz at brainz, i bet ur last 2 duck
burn mutha fuckerz burn! an now ur literaly hot!
now dat all da otherz iz dead niggaz im all u got! haha

Chorus x1

Verse 1:
dis iz da last verse, 2 make it work im have 2 twist around da tempo
skip around da mental lyricz an spit gental 2 leave ya a memento
some sentamental grammer, fundamental 2 makin hitz on ur level
assemble da militia, keepin it in da family auntz sistaz an kin folk
jus admit yall niggaz iz stoked, hopin ill blow up an go str8 gold,
platinum, double fold, from NYC 2 Moscow, my flow is ice cold
& luke warm at da same time, da rest r flukez so we had 2 mute em
had 2 shoot em an loot em 2 pay off stripperz like Duke Nukem
got a sweet tooth 4 da music while da rest of ya bustaz iz toothless
unfold da blueprintz of ur scheme 2 end hip hop, an u call me ruthless
choose it as it comes niggaz if ya luve pullin triggaz an pissin in a pot
& runnin from copz on ur own block, but if not look no furtha im all u got!
haha

Chorus: x2

haha ya niggaz! LA aka Da 7 Crown
haha, let people know dat da Lz in town
it all on me, haha
Fizzuck Yall!!!!
:thefinger

good vocabulary use and the chorus part was tight, i really liked the chorus.you got some skill with that.

..this was uh~~~I really wasn't feeling this at all..your vocab and flow was okay..but..the content was reallly lacking..peace..

Yeah this was ok.....your structure in this was alright, probably could try to shorten some of your bars down a bit so they dont seem so stretched out....the vocab in this was ok, could be up'd though i think....your flow could use some work, it flowed, but not to well.....but keep at it.