Stupid shit
 

im tired of stipid ass shit
the only way i kan react to this shit is when i spit
and lets face it yall shit is gay
and mine is betta
i dun spit
i spray
ya rhymes give you tooth decae
cant even hold your teeth together
my rhymes cut so deep
theyll have to sew you back together
with platnum or leather
when im mad mean
ill keep my laces clean
so its the 1st time there dirty
when kick in your spleen
you gona need a physician
for your stupiid ass decisions
to go in your brain and find out what your missin
my ass is what your kissin
im on fire like nitro glicerine
and your what im dissin
your mom is who im kissin
your mouth is where im pissin
when im done im gona spit in it
sorry for whoeva kissin it :cussing:

mad nice keep elevatin and you'll be relli good =]

Thanks for the feed... stay true

This was alright....probably could have used a better structure in this though, but it was ok, just try keeping your lines around the same length, probably could have made some of your lines a little longer but its was alright....you had some alright flow in this....vocab was alright it could be up'd though i think....also try adding some multies to this to make it better...but keep at it.