SaRe 2 V.s. Gazeebo
 

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i rhyme till i spit dry and get thirsty
i gota tell you somthin dun cry but i fuked ya mom on ya 16th birthday
i dun like the broad but i did it anway
it came to me that november 8th was always my craziest day
it was always when ya mom was stressed out but came to play
dun you remember wen her bedroom soundin like it was rumblin in the bronx
more like and earth quake
she came out with kum on her said it was from your birthday cake
ya faggot ass liked it and said oops my mistake
dun get tight sit bak and relax
if you don't watch ya "drink" i gota a poket full of exlax
liquid pink
keep the bathroom locked so you unload in the sink
the amount you shit wont cover the amount i gave ya mom to drink
now tell me gazeebo now that im sitting in you wut you think?

Call my rhymes pringles,cuz they always stayin poppin/
Wanna help your rap career......start by stopppin/
Im firing up this battle like sumthing you've never seen/
Start a rap career?.....Why?.....Your not even fourteen/
Call this Ali Frasier....or the thriller in Minilla/
Blah Blah Blah....what did you think of that filler/
Tell people the truth theres no need to lie yo/
Cuz the only reason your "gifted" is cuz your born on cinco de mayo/
Record bout to change..think before u battle me again, u just a pup/
The alphabet's shrinking down to 25 cause GaZeeBo just ate "U" up/


votes!!!!!

ite gaz gets this,
his opener was tite man good shit,like whoa,
nice flow dawg just take the */* of the end they newbieish man.......nice punches,
sare you ite just came played that mum shit is wak,
also your shit was either streched or to short.work on structure.

v-gaz,

return the favor plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107881 thx..............pz

cmon man return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107881 thx................pz

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uppin 3

sare - structure sucked.......flow fell off......vocab was basic..........no good multis..........ur wordplay didnt make since and it was wack..........no good punches at all.........stop dissin cats moms dawg, them punches suck ass..........personals were wack

gazeebo - structure was good..........it flowed good........vocab was pretty good........some of the multis were nice........tight wordplay...........most of the punches were tight..........pretty good personals

conclusion - gazeebo takes this in structure, flow, wordplay, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote.

VOTE - GAZEEBO

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion, id appreciate if u did the same.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947

much appreciated.........

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..One sided battle...sare's flow was a little choppy and he or she whom ever it is didn't come strong at all..in the otherhand Gaz's flow had more flare and he mos-def had all the punches,easy to vote-Gazeebo

yeah i agree wit this............................
thats how it werks when shit dont come in full force.............
vote/gazeebo....hit this up please in return..................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069

uppin 5

Weird little story from Sare...

Not really a battle rhyme, though...

Just mostly weird.

Gaz hit with wordplay, directed punches personally...

And used some nice humor on that opener.

Flowed just right, yada, yada, yada...

Better on all points, Gaz