The Window
 

As the wind-blows, a gust refreshe's my body
its a must.. success, but losing.. odly?
No.. its godly, that you can compare both together
and still feel good about urself forever
Its an ether.. rough like tether, but latex smooth
the groove of life.. move, and swipe..
The replenish of air into ur face.. open
then close, the begging. and start at the ending
Backwards, yet forwards.. eating these words
and it flows threw ur mind.. askin u the same question
"Close The Window Of Life?" or "Take its goods, and use them"
if you refuse.. then.. dont complain when it falls beneath you
Defeat.. is true... but the same blue, view off the top of ur roof
life is love.. and I will renew... to keep it true
Never forget my view... just rember wen the wind does blow
open your window....

oh and.. peep the song called "Haste" by me & maven..
these r 2 dope ass piecies.. but i bet they'll both be slept on
o'well

not bad, you had some nice iamgery

the ender was alright, but you oculd've made yourself a little more clear and added a better flow

it actually did flow.. but thanks for the rep

hii