fuck y'all my baby is born
 

Fuck y'all
and da shit you say
trippins back
to prove your all gay
pussy ass faggots that never got laid
fronted some rock and never got paid
well what i meant too say
is i now gotta little baby girl
and to me shes day whole fuckin world
every day i get on my knees to pray
to say how lucky i am
to look into her eyes
only for her I would fucking die
this isn't a lie i'd do anything to get by
with a shirt on her back and a home to go too
workin three jobs and I still go to school
from onlookers eyes this just ain't cool
from criminal to dad
Used 2 be bad
smokin a rock
totin a glock

this is for al my ellow fathers

As a fellow father...

I commend you loving your daughter and trying to better yourself for her.

Way to man up.

As a writer, though...

You kinda suck.

Very simple format, no wordplay...

No metas, not even a good flow.

Great message, horrible delivery.

But keep at it...

Peace

that was bullshit elevate man
everything about that verse was wack

you right about one yo you was trippin when this ....just work at it nigga it will better sooner or later