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Slow Hands-Vs- Metaphors
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no d.r. votes yada yada.. u no the rest... i drop first. |
It Was Practical u Thought ID loose,But U Shuda Known Man..
Cuz Im Tactical at My Pursuit,While u Throwin Punches Wit SlowHAnds.. It Dont Add up.You Claim You Ill/Even The Sickest Cracker Period U Run An Battle n The League But ya Still a Cracker lyriscist.. I Aint Fearin Shit.Just Spittin For respect an One Reason.. ShowYa Bars Are Like Empty Dictionaries..They Aint Got No Meanings.. After a View U wont show up.Keyed this verse For Nuthin.. I Belong N the League.Mc's like me Only come a Dime a Dozen.. Ya lines are Runnin .Wut U Headin for My Metaphors Speak4Emself.. Got Scared N vanished But Quo U still Get the L So UnfastenyaBelt.. Cuz u lackin the Heallth.Once was Ill Now as herbish as Weed.. Our Skillz Are as Precise as the Gap between Lettermans teeth.. aite here typed it up pretty quick just for the fuk of it.. good luk..pc drop soon man.. |
Metaphor ? Oh jesus not another one, skip to the next page
Kid I'll slap ya skin from first to last.. and spell out your middle name with ya ribcage I bet you don't get that, but I won't sit and hate, whore Cuz I'm always above U.. just like 7 and 8, on ya keyboard And fuck a name, lets put you all and capitals, fellas.. I'll flip out, and put enough caps.. in this kid to make LL Cool J jealous Disgrace ya face, flame ya for days kid, I have sick wit Tried to climb up the ladder of ranks.. got pissed on then fuckin fell off it And that was that, killed in a quick 10, like ya sex life Or maybe a we did quick 10.. cuz that's what you prefer to date right ? Heh |
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Dope . . vote-shatter star overall doper verse, other kid didnt have nothin i liked, ... |
vote Slow hands on my cock... there was no battle... the opener was enough... why are you here battling... you make me mad at you...
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Overall Slow hands took this with creativity and wordplay. Along with much much harder punches. Metaphors.. you have mad potential. you just need to know how to word your punches so that they meet their full affect. Not much of a close battle.. However not bad.
Vote- Slow Hands |
hmm ya verse is aite....slowhands...
but i dont no i dont think u killled me.. so wut u think tho............................................. |
ok almost a one sided battle...so u know....heres my thought
Flow:both...no comment Strucutre:both....same sizes punches:barely...barely slowhands...both had punches coming at each other...but some from slowhadns had me rolling. personals...ehhh...i dont really think there was any i might have to overlook it multis:hardly any i seen... overall:slowhands No hate just my opionion.. hit up my audio battle its being slept on. peace! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=103965 |
hmmm dont really no..u cats neeeda stop dik riding an vote honestly one sided.
io had punhces mulites metaphors an personals.. |
Cuz I'm always above U..
just like 7 and 8, on ya keyboard hahaha :) that line killed metaphores by itself.... otherwise good attemp by metaphores, he had oright punches. Slow hands killed him with punches and an entertaining verse. Props to both vote - slow hands |
nobodys dickriding metaphor. ..
v/ slowhands.. meta - ur punches werent bad, they were just average throughout.. some of the stuff u were just stating facts, like "he calls himself the sickest cracker period"... how does that hurt him? you have to turn it against him, not simply state that. quo - aite punches. liked the 7 & 8 one... both of you, vote here... now ! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...486#post1104486 |
Up up and awaaayyyy
Come on now.. it's like 6-0 and the poll says 2-0.. please someone poll vote. We can all tell I crushed the kid lol. |
pretty weak by both...and that 7 over 8 line is trash....but hands still wins the battle.......
just a better verse .......got straight to the punch with no bullshit...even though punches were not good.... hands wins |
^I'd crush you too..
With much ease. But thanks for the vote. Just a key. But anyways.. Lets get 2 more pleasseeee. I wanna finish this battle asap. |
v/ quo
gametime you dont kno what your saying....quo dropped well for a key....had some nice punches....meta...you had some played concepts....did really have a great verse...so therefore...quo takes this based on better punches, better everything |
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