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FanTa ZeE 01-19-04 03:09 PM

Drugz nd Liqour
 
Like Tyrets Syndrone victims i 'spit shit' at every chance,
My mouth released profanities sit and watch as i advance,
At a glance, this rap game for sucess and higher finance,
Money got me actin funny, heads spinning like a break dance,
Round and round, pop an asprin, paracetamol and pills,
The shit begins, under my skin, tylynol and fluid spills,
My friend died or was he killed? i couldn't get the carpet clean,
Put the whole thing in quick cycle, broke the wash machine,
I think i've lost my spleen, if you've seen it please return it,
Lost a bag of 'green' so i rolled up the grass and burnt it,
When its lit, i take my hit, hissy fit upon the floor,
Drove a car without a permit sped to the club and killed a whore,
Another hit, shit; I don't remember anymore?
Is that the paranoia kicking in? is that the pow..lice at my door?
Is someone trying to kill me? do they know i did some more?
Drugs and liqour got me off quicker than any man at a flicker
Down a pint of hennesey and i end up feeling sicker
Then a vicar with one leg sitting in a room full of muslims
Fuck this shit, I'm off to bed, to sleep before the floor spins.

Penskills 01-19-04 03:31 PM

...My favorite "female Emcee"..with another dope piece..you amaze me with your wordplay...

FanTa ZeE 01-19-04 03:35 PM

wow, am i seriously your favourite female emcee? seriously? wow, that suprises me..and you like my wordplay! jesus..you must be after something! LMAO

Luv You 2

Log1k 01-19-04 03:36 PM

wow..... impressive

Log1k 01-19-04 03:37 PM

k i gotta give you props... I never heard a girl spit like that... you drop any audio... I'd like to hear it

Penskills 01-19-04 03:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by FanTa ZeE
wow, am i seriously your favourite female emcee? seriously? wow, that suprises me..and you like my wordplay! jesus..you must be after something! LMAO

Luv You 2


..after... :hump: ..?????

Menik 01-19-04 05:18 PM

^lol...but yeah this was a nice piece here...you had good structure in this.....the flow was good through out it i thought, it stayed on pretty well in this, flowed good....you had some good vocab....good wordplay like stated before me....had some nice lines in there....overall a nice piece....keep at it.

FanTa ZeE 01-20-04 01:51 PM

thank y'all so much..for once in my life i can feel proud..and to Penskills...we haven't even had a first date! LMAO..

think i could be a legend one day?


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