Jay-Nova vs Ja'e Roc
10 line min...14 max
no d/r no crew no bytin no hate due in 30 min or dqed* 1 :thefinger |
jay nova, bout to get run over, n over,
wanna be mc, jockin jay z, ya hecked ya ava, seein that i knew u had no flava, new to rb, a winner is what u wont ever be, u's far from killa, u aint got 1 in ya trailer, so ya must be on the libaries comp, either way u gettin stomped, fuckin wangster, talkin hard u's an aol gangster, imma spit wit tef, cut off ur right, n leave ur other half left, my nine milly, have u spread like cheese from philly, all over a bagel, dam u dont want to tangle, ur flow should be telegrafic, i picture u caught up in traffic, hope u on dial up, can see u paying for dsl when u suck, only thing u know about the projects, is what u hear in ur headsets, comin here new,repersent the world worst crew, fuck it im done so your thru. |
mods close this this cat is alway whinning in his battles if some one goes over the line limit, or the time limit an hes past 30 mins to drop.
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he sets the rules then dont abid by them, or if u dont whines. this should be closed.
for example this is what he wrote in his last battle. is this a fuckin joke........imma take it easy on this cat....and u had more then 12.....14 homie....WOW....but check this you DAN...DA MAN!....ur whack...what u flowin for?/ i dont want to be the main reason u bout to go 0 and 4/* battlin me...where do u get OFF WITH THIS?/ cause u flow like a LAXATIVE...all you spit off ...is SHIT/ well u was at home...practicin ya ryhmes spittin/ im SERVIN you in this battle....i geuss u can call my ryhmes chicken/* ya ryhmes is so bad...im surpised they aint makin the news/ cause u couldnt win this battle....IF YOU PAID ME TO LOSE?/ last bar....takin easy well i blast at it/ but i still got this cat breathin HEAVY...like he was ashmatic/ yo this cat wasa fuckin joke man....up these votes...or dq him for breakin the line limit...either way i get the win....1.....HAHAHAHAHA __________________ Jay-Nova and ReaLL....... spit..... A T O M I K F L O S |
HAHA WE DO I ALWAYS GET STUCK WIT THE WEAK CATS....
O WEL...HEAR WE GO...BOUT TO TAKE IT EASY ON THIS CAT...AGAIN! yo jae roc...you bett dunk when them thangs pop/ before i put bullits hole...WHERE YA ROCK YA TANK TOP/ I aint JAY........bust u must be smokin that "LA LA LA" SOLDIER/ cause when i rap...my punches will DUST more then DIRT OFF UR SHOULDER/ who u think u playin wit.....them ryhmes that ya spit/ they couldnt win...if a MOD DQED my shit/ thats cats fam..got him so GASSED up/ when i spit FIRE....im surprised it dont BLOW his hoe ass up/ YUP....its WRAP kid.....no need to be testin/ cause the only thing u RIPPIN...is the PAPER off this PRESENT.../ didnt even try man.......this cat is crazy...were does he get off?.....1 |
dawg it went over 6 mins....i have a life homie..and spit first...have 30 after u spit bitch...stop whynin and lets gets some votes.............
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Why Would We Close It Dumb Ass.....i Went Over By 6 Mins.....i Could If It Was 20 Or 30.......so Calm Down Dick........lets Get Some Votes.......
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jae - ok structure..........flow fell off.........vocab was basic.........ok multis.........bad metas.........no wordplay.........punches were weak..........no personals
jay - structure was good......flow was ok.......vocab was basic.......some of the multis were good.......no metas.........wordplay was tight........some of the punches hit hard.........good personals conclusion - jay nova takes this in strucutre, flow, wordplay and punches so he gets my vote VOTE - JAY NOVA yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947 much appreciated......... |
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Ja'e Roc last bar....takin easy well i blast at it/ but i still got this cat breathin HEAVY...like he was ashmatic/ ----- Flow~Jay Nova Vocab~Tie(BasiK) Metaphors~Ja'e Rock(Weak) Punches~Jay Nova(Hit Harder) Multis~Jay Nova Wordplay~Jay Nova(Nice) Overall Vote~Jay Nova ~:Explaination:~ Punches Hit Harder Ok Wordplay And Good Multis Won this For Him Cla$$ick.....It's On |
Ja'e Rocs Second Verse Is Mine That He Copied And Pasted To Show Some Stupid Point.......his Verse Is The Very First Verse Written...one.....so I Geuss He Liked Both My Lines....
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