To Be Or Not To Be...[Unfinished Version]
 

This Was Writtin Few Days Ago In An Econo Lodge In Chahokia ILL... After 2 211 Stell Reserve 4-0's

If To Be Or Not TO Be Is The Question...
It Aint Fittin In My Quest For Religion So It Lessins...
This Great Question Becomes A Statment...
As I Look For Religious Placement And Find Satan...
The Stamement Becomes A Fragment...
I Remain Placid As God Plays A Pawn In My Lifes Exactment...
This Dumbfounding Fragment Becomes Muhfuckin Nuthin...
My Heart Stays True To Somthing As Emptiness Is Pumpin...
You Can Say That Even I, Sit Up At Night Wondrin How Ill Die...
To Be Or Not To Be Is Wrong, The Question Is What Should I Write...

I Stand Alone In A Public Place...
I Analyze Humanity With Dissapointment On My Face...
My Rhymes Flow Without Any Regression...
I Analyze Reality, And Cope With Depression...
Hunger Is My Drive, Tryna Strive In Life...
Religion Tells Me, Hells Where Ill Be When I Die...

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yo that was some good shit, i really like reading it and it flowed very well. the multis was good and it was nice to read. prolly a lil to short but i bet u can make it longer.

check this out for me and vote man ...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108296

Fine piece....wasnt really long enough to grab my attention...it was pretty simple but it had good qualities...Nice theme but the flow was sketchy and it lacked any multies, true metaphors...Gotta work on expandin on your piece cause it started gettin good but then it got chopped off...more of a poem...6.5/10

Forgot to post a link to my open mic....please give feedback, its gettin slept on...Nice piece^^^

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108340