ReaLL Vs Rule
 

10 lines
House Rules
You Drop 15 minutes after check in...I drop 15 minutes after you.

check in................................................ .............................

Alright I'm Droppen Now I Got No Time To Wait.
Ten Lines..Here We Go.

Basically i'm goin soft wit a limp verse to prove you suck
I could write anything..and still beat this stupid fuck.
Punch line after punch line just hurtin this whore...
But Damn..
Eatin pussy isn't something i havent done before
^^that line Should be quoted I think it's kinda funny
you can die..fuckin a guy in the anal aint striaght dunny
7th line so i take it this ones gunna be lucky..
Like you winnin...
Over Rule..hell no..that's as rare as a straights in kentucky
Last bar...bout time...i'm bored with this battle..damn
I went simple...so even you could visualize and understand



If your verse is done cool...if not hurry up....and who ever votes...drop a link and we'll hit it up honestly

breathe easy dogg dont fuck wit me/
or you can catch a whole in ya body the size of a cd/
nigga im reall and i set the rule/
only time u shot somehtin was in a game of pool/
i pop guns that you gotta shoot wit 2 arms/
so when i cock back the shotty you aint goin to far/
im the best at this/ and on my neck and wrist,/
i shine like lights on december 25th/
the jewls, i cop it/the guns i pop it/
mess around and i'll leave red streaks across ur body
like the jerseys on the rockets/

MOTHAFUKKA A T F

up themm votes............................................. .....................

reall

breathe easy dogg dont fuck wit me/
or you can catch a whole in ya body the size of a cd/<--ok just wasnt hard hitting..

nigga im reall and i set the rule/
only time u shot somehtin was in a game of pool/<--nah..

i pop guns that you gotta shoot wit 2 arms/
so when i cock back the shotty you aint goin to far/<--blah..

im the best at this/ and on my neck and wrist,/
i shine like lights on december 25th/<--and pertaining to battleing?

the jewls, i cop it/the guns i pop it/
mess around and i'll leave red streaks across ur body
like the jerseys on the rockets/<--not good,i still dont see how you got any votes in our battle..DR


rule

Basically i'm goin soft wit a limp verse to prove you suck
I could write anything..and still beat this stupid fuck.<--cool opener..

Punch line after punch line just hurtin this whore...
But Damn..
Eatin pussy isn't something i havent done before<--lol..

^^that line Should be quoted I think it's kinda funny
you can die..fuckin a guy in the anal aint striaght dunny<--ok,not feeling it..

7th line so i take it this ones gunna be lucky..
Like you winnin...
Over Rule..hell no..that's as rare as a straights in kentucky<--i guess..

Last bar...bout time...i'm bored with this battle..damn
I went simple...so even you could visualize and understand<--cool..

vote rule he just came direct,and halfassed it,some nice lines..reall man need to try..

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This was very close, seemed like Rule did half-ass his verse.

Punches: Reall
Wordplay: Rule
Multis: Neither
Metas: Rule
Personals: Neither

vote - Rule

I thought Rule's verse had a bit of humor, which barely took this battle. Reall, you need to step up your verses, stretch them out more, and use less filler.

mess around and i'll leave red streaks across ur body
like the jerseys on the rockets/
Best line from Reall

Over Rule..hell no..that's as rare as a straights in kentucky
Best from Rule, sorta meta.

thanks uppen this...i'll hit up battles later tomorrow....peace...uppen

uppin............................................. .......

uppen
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One sided

Punches..Rule and his weren't good at all... Reall was wack... sorry reall

Flow.. Rule got this too.. more consistant.. and had a couple multies in there

Creativity/wordplay....Rule again... more original than realls played lines

So

v/ Rule

hit this up with an honest vote...thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=108357&page=1

iight...

rule takes this so fukin easily... how can you spit about guns and 'jewls' and hope to win a battle...

even tho rule was portraying the fact that he could merk him without trying... it worked... cuz he has... simple really...

good punches from rule... had some nice vocab and wordplay... structure was tight aswell...

reall... your verse lacked in most areas... structure wasnt good... flow was off... not many punches... basically a verse of filler... elevate...

vote - rule...

hit this up...

iight...

rule takes this so fukin easily... how can you spit about guns and 'jewls' and hope to win a battle...

even tho rule was portraying the fact that he could merk him without trying... it worked... cuz he has... simple really...

good punches from rule... had some nice vocab and wordplay... structure was tight aswell...

reall... your verse lacked in most areas... structure wasnt good... flow was off... not many punches... basically a verse of filler... elevate...

vote - rule...

hit this up...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...477#post1109477

thanks

OUT

v/rule

Rule was more consistant..
He won in punches...
Reall had a couple decent lines, but just wasnt consistant enough...

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-W1