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Limited Edition Vs. Hardhitter
Yo...rules...
10 Lines House rules You spit first Waitin on you dawg... |
ightt ill have it posted in about 20-25 min's ightt...............................
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yo im gunna give you a simple sample of wut im workin wit// your lyrics are thinthey snappin like tooth picks// we all know limited loves to sueth dicks,my lyrics are sick and glichless like i said yours are weak like all these bitches.......
YOU got a demo and its a CD ROM you think u tight cuz your on rapbattels.COM its sad u just a fag in a womens dress bet next month u be buyin them pills to enhance your breast// why take the chance of stepin to me ull just get rolled on like every MC?? I'm that lyricly gifted/my words will hit u and make u feel like your whoel fuckin world just shifted//SO what u plan to do?/or where you plan to go?/fuck all this ramblin let hear u flow?........... |
Yo...listen up...
Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids? You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper... Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper You the sort...who walks around with empty Colt bottles... You knew I spit ill...so ya wore your protective goggles Your herbness...you have just succesesfully proved... Yous a hardhitter...but ya couldnt swing hard.... ...even if you was Babe Ruth... Nice battle... |
ightt mann let get these votes in..............*1*
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Ight...
Structure- both need work but Lmtd wtf was that shit... punches-tie, lmtd were cleaner at times all tho More humor was delivered by hardhitter flow-hardhitter had a cleaner flow, lmtd was ight but at times he went off track wordplay-Hard hitter asocitated fluently thru out the rhyme more creativity, giving him the upper hand to the battle...his verse was more of a battle verse then Lmtd's was v/ hardhitter no beef |
i wasn't feeling either verse. both i felt were played in creativity. flow was better in hard hitters verse. punches were better in LE's. both need uppin, but i felt that the end line in LE's got this one. it was a nice play on his name, and i kinda thought it was funny.
vote=LE RETURN THE FAVOR: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...32&page=2&pp=15 |
ightt uppin for votes.............................#2
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A'ight thx...uppin1...................................... ..................................................
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ite h hitter was played also had wak flow and structure was abit of man,
l edition had wak structure but his punches hit harder also, his flow was beta (bit streched inm places tho)............. plz hit this na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...270#post1108270 thx.............pz Unexplained vote removed |
get these votes in and let me know i will return the favor...............1
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..One of the weakest battles of all time...I don't even want to break this one down..HH came a little better..punches more clever(not by much),both had terrible structure,flow was okat(it sucked compared to others),but overall HH was little bit better..vote HH
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thanx penskills i will be sure to return the favor..............*1*
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punches le:Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting
I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting metas le: You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper... Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper personals le: You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids? You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did flow: i guess i gotta say hard hitter overall i gotta go with le for a overall better verse peep the links in my sig honestly please |
A'ight thx...uppin2...................................... .......
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