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L.E 01-19-04 08:56 PM

Limited Edition Vs. Hardhitter
 
Yo...rules...

10 Lines
House rules
You spit first

Waitin on you dawg...

Hitta 01-19-04 08:59 PM

ightt ill have it posted in about 20-25 min's ightt...............................

Hitta 01-19-04 09:20 PM

yo im gunna give you a simple sample of wut im workin wit// your lyrics are thinthey snappin like tooth picks// we all know limited loves to sueth dicks,my lyrics are sick and glichless like i said yours are weak like all these bitches.......
YOU got a demo and its a CD ROM you think u tight cuz your on rapbattels.COM
its sad u just a fag in a womens dress
bet next month u be buyin them pills to enhance your breast//
why take the chance of stepin to me ull just get rolled on like every MC??
I'm that lyricly gifted/my words will hit u and make u feel like your whoel fuckin world just shifted//SO what u plan to do?/or where you plan to go?/fuck all this ramblin let hear u flow?...........

L.E 01-19-04 09:35 PM

Yo...listen up...

Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting
I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting

You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids?
You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did

You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper...
Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper

You the sort...who walks around with empty Colt bottles...
You knew I spit ill...so ya wore your protective goggles

Your herbness...you have just succesesfully proved...
Yous a hardhitter...but ya couldnt swing hard....

...even if you was Babe Ruth...

Nice battle...

Hitta 01-19-04 09:39 PM

ightt mann let get these votes in..............*1*

MichaelMadness 01-19-04 10:29 PM

Ight...
Structure- both need work but Lmtd wtf was that shit...
punches-tie, lmtd were cleaner at times all tho More humor was delivered by hardhitter
flow-hardhitter had a cleaner flow, lmtd was ight but at times he went off track
wordplay-Hard hitter asocitated fluently thru out the rhyme more creativity, giving him the upper hand to the battle...his verse was more of a battle verse then Lmtd's was
v/ hardhitter
no beef

fuck up 01-19-04 11:37 PM

i wasn't feeling either verse. both i felt were played in creativity. flow was better in hard hitters verse. punches were better in LE's. both need uppin, but i felt that the end line in LE's got this one. it was a nice play on his name, and i kinda thought it was funny.

vote=LE

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Hitta 01-20-04 04:19 PM

ightt uppin for votes.............................#2

L.E 01-20-04 04:43 PM

A'ight thx...uppin1...................................... ..................................................

.:K:. 01-20-04 04:47 PM

ite h hitter was played also had wak flow and structure was abit of man,
l edition had wak structure but his punches hit harder also,
his flow was beta (bit streched inm places tho).............

plz hit this na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...270#post1108270 thx.............pz


Unexplained vote removed

Hitta 01-20-04 04:49 PM

get these votes in and let me know i will return the favor...............1

Penskills 01-20-04 04:50 PM

..One of the weakest battles of all time...I don't even want to break this one down..HH came a little better..punches more clever(not by much),both had terrible structure,flow was okat(it sucked compared to others),but overall HH was little bit better..vote HH



Unexplained vote removed

Hitta 01-20-04 04:56 PM

thanx penskills i will be sure to return the favor..............*1*

Dustin Dubree 01-20-04 05:40 PM

punches le:Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting
I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting

metas le: You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper...
Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper

personals le: You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids?
You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did

flow: i guess i gotta say hard hitter

overall i gotta go with le for a overall better verse

peep the links in my sig honestly please

L.E 01-20-04 09:29 PM

A'ight thx...uppin2...................................... .......


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