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Fo-Real Vs C.Quip
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please, my rhymes illistrating intimidation sending complications through the duration of this battle causing you to resort to evacutation, your rhymes similar to atari games more basic than pong, fillen yo rhymes with filler making em look long, so you consider your ten lines iller than a bong, filled wit chronic i'm lyrically spittin bubonic, so retract your lines i'm headed at you with words equivelint to an arsenaul of A.ks and Nines, cuz your rhymes are more played than your moms pussy at back yard bar b ques, she sucks dick so much she's constantly spittin curly q's my versus are like lyrical writers block sendin you into confusion, sorry for the abusin but my punches leave you internally bleadin from excessive bruisin, callin you missy elliot cuz your rhymes constantly under construction, this is an induction to a book of merked bitches under for reals hands leavin ya wit body full of stitches |
>>>>>Chiz'Eck-"N"
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[K]ey [S]tyle
10 Minute Key... Kid..Give Up..I'm Ill, While You Coming Plain Like Terrorist Attacks/ When I Step In The Ring The Battle'll Be Like Tortialls..Its A Wrap/ Yah Too Wack Black, I'll Impact Yah Back And Destroy Yah Flow/ Cause Its Been "Taught", I'm The Sickest "Hands Down" Thats Why My Class Paticipation Is Low/ Yah Dead Bro, I'll Do This Shit Like "Mel Gibson" And Leave You With Signs/ Hell...Its Like I'ma Pencil The Way I'm Staying Above Your Lines/ Yah Ripped..With My Mouth Thats Slick..So Just Stick To Rappin/ You Just Ain't "Touching" My "Punches" Like Non-Violent Combatants/ But Like Chewing Gum In Class I'll Have Yah Bubbles Burst/ This Verse Is A Curse..Thats Why I Lay "Sick Ass Lines" Like Fat Bitches In Short Skirts/ Kid..Taggin Yah Underwear Only Time You're Signing A Label..Uhh...You Coming With More "Scrambled Lines" Then Priate Cable.. |
fo-real had this. the only thang C.Quip did better was the finish and thats usually da most important but the rest was pretty weak compared ta fo-real's.
vote- fo real |
Don't Vote If You're A Wack Newbie..Anyways Uppin..
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this was an ok battle
fo real you need to improe on yourstructure, your flow wasn't being felt by me cuz your lines didn't seem like they had an end but your vocab was good, only if you added it to your punches c. all you had was punches and disses and i think thats what took this battle you had a better verse because of the punches and thats how i saw this battle to C.Quip & fo-real:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108441 |
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Final Upp
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can we get a fuckin vote up in dis bitch
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