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The Jett 01-19-04 10:11 PM

CarsonJet -v- mdizz
 
10 lines
normal rules
blind spits
drop in reasonable time

check in

The Jett 01-19-04 10:12 PM

check'd in....

Just so u kno....I made it 300 posts,
Im sure u don't care about that.......

mdizz 01-19-04 10:13 PM

watever works........................
check...47,50!

The Jett 01-19-04 10:41 PM

mdizz


Mdizz...chek'd in whatever work's^^...well in your case edit
This cat's pathetic...He aint his avi..But he'll leave red-headed
Yea carson said it, ya wanna battle me? what the fuck u on?...
I mean U changed ur name yeh....but ur still leavin down 1-n-Gone..
What did u think?...dawg I'm rollin harder than 4 wheels labelled brinks
Shoulda made this Pinks...cus basicly ur jus a whore in instinkz
He's R&B's best treat....but he never' the giver, yo check his feat
Please...I gotta tell this kid to stand cus he can't take a seat..
I didnt even check the state...but mdizz it jus occured to me...
U didn't want a battle me u wanted a date...I forget u rep'd new jerzey

mdizz 01-19-04 10:51 PM

this kids trash...X2? ima make myself loud n clear
his spits worse then Tara Reid,'way Carson-Jet outa here
tha end is near..a loss for u is no uncommon feat
so il exploit this fool like carrot top pushin for AT&T
ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy
ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people..remember carsonjet...2k_4?!
if hes up for more..il own u for a line or 2..
but il tell u dude.that^^^ was made clear from line one-
-or two

The Jett 01-20-04 11:00 AM

vote (1)

menolin 01-20-04 11:10 AM

carsonjetx2
Mdizz...chek'd in whatever work's^^...well in your case edit
This cat's pathetic...He aint his avi..But he'll leave red-headed
5/10

Yea carson said it, ya wanna battle me? what the fuck u on?...
I mean U changed ur name yeh....but ur still leavin down 1-n-Gone..
5/10

What did u think?...dawg I'm rollin harder than 4 wheels labelled brinks
Shoulda made this Pinks...cus basicly ur jus a whore in instinkz
7/10

He's R&B's best treat....but he never' the giver, yo check his feat
Please...I gotta tell this kid to stand cus he can't take a seat..
6/10

I didnt even check the state...but mdizz it jus occured to me...
U didn't want a battle me u wanted a date...I forget u rep'd new jerzey
5/10

overall 28/50


mdizz
this kids trash...X2? ima make myself loud n clear
his spits worse then Tara Reid,'way Carson-Jet outa here
5/10

tha end is near..a loss for u is no uncommon feat
so il exploit this fool like carrot top pushin for AT&T
5/10

ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy
4/10

ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people..remember carsonjet...2k_4?!
6/10

if hes up for more..il own u for a line or 2..
but il tell u dude.that^^^ was made clear from line one-
-or two
5/10

overall 25/50


my vote CarsonjetX2

FuE-xIoN 01-20-04 12:35 PM

Close Battle....Carson Had Some Ok Punches But None Hit Hard In My Opinion...mdizz Had One Quotable Which Is The Only Thing That Gave Him The Win...

Quote:
Originally Posted by mdizz
ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy


Funny, LoL...Nice Punch..But Of Course The Guy Above Me Gave This The Worst Rating Of mdizz's Verse....

Punches - Tie
Personals - mdizz (Harder)
Structure - mdizz
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Carson
Multis - Carson

Vote - mdizz, For Having Better Punches And A Harder Hitting Verse...

Will You Two Check These With An Honest Vote:
FuE-xIoN vs. Kaos Theory (Wits End Can Vote)
FuE-xIoN vs. -Technician-

FuE-xIoN 01-20-04 12:38 PM

What The Fuck Is This Silly Shit...300 Posts?? When Did This Start...I Will Get If Fixed

The Jett 01-20-04 01:59 PM

Yeh...have some one edit your vote in...
your not a newby.....the 300 posts is to keep the herbs away...

ur not...have axe-feeb-or token fix...
thanks for votes uppin

mdizz 01-20-04 05:08 PM

.....................uppin..................votes. ...........

The Jett 01-21-04 12:23 PM

(2)

Casual 01-21-04 02:39 PM

Dunno if i can poll but i'll drop the vote anyway..

Originality - Both.. nothin played here
Punches - Carson.. each one was personal an witty.. no filler
Personals - Carson.. all but one line was directed strait at opponent
Flow - Both.. easy to follow
Structure - Both.. ^ see above
Multis - Neither.. thas coo.. jus a different approach
Opener - Carson.. crackin.. funny, witty, etc
Closer - mdizz.. saved the best til last

VoTe = Carson

Felt he had less filler an as usual each line was a personal punch..

Drop a vote on this plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1111738

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The Jett 01-21-04 05:50 PM

(3)

COM 01-21-04 05:58 PM

ok'ish battle,, carson won the punches but had the weaker structure..... mdizz had decent structure but i only spotted one punch which was actually the best in the battle,, the rest of his shit was pathetic though....... so carson takes it with a much better allround verse,,,,, the only things mdizz takes is the best single punch and slightly better structure,, carson takes better punches,, more creative (original) with a few good personals, and thats what wins battles,, by the way the punch from mdizz i was reffering to is :

ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people.. remember carson jet 2k_4?!
^quite good

anyway VOTE CARSON,,
and can you guys hit up a battle from my sig with an honest vote?? thanx


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