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Born To Kill 01-20-04 11:19 AM

Born to Kill vs. Double-0 Seven
 
I called out for anyone...

He answered.

So here we go...

10 - 12 lines.

Due in around an hour or so.

Good luck, my man.

menolin 01-20-04 11:20 AM

ok i will be keyin up!!!
i battled you a few times, an never beat you!!!!
i might even come close this time!!

Born To Kill 01-20-04 12:37 PM

Damn kid, why ya want me ta repeat on ya ass, like pain?
I fucked ya bad before, and now I'm sure ta do it again.
Ya way boring, fact is ya verses have me wantin ta shriek...
1 rhyme from him is duller, than all the newb efforts this week.
And 007 ain't hittin tha pussy, it's like his dick done retired...
If ya held his love life to a mirror, ya'd swear he's a vampire.
Being dumb and witless don't help, kid ain't close ta funny...
But I laughed, when he actually sold his car for gas money.
So go on little Spyboy, take ya wanna be Bond elsewhere...
Ya real job's being a visual aid in geometry, cuz ya so square.
But it ain't all your fault, bad luck's more than got ya cryin...
007's so bad off, if he owned a cemetary peeps would stop dyin.

menolin 01-20-04 12:40 PM

*sorry if it was so long, it keeps saying your online, an offline*



BTK both your wins an losses are catchin up to your age,
it hard to personal against you, cos they all been played,
you be out head-hunting?? im thinking prostitues at night,
thats shits unforgivable! point of view taken from ur wife!
sorry but i know you 'son' the whole of this website,
i win played, i new with hunger!! you past it, u got a spite,
raps pointless, with out geometry, so i rap from all angles,
you could never hold me back, even if i was born with handles,
i disable your respiritory system, cause tumours of the brain,
cutting off your hearts blood flow, i split the pulmonary vein!!



blahhh

menolin 01-20-04 12:43 PM

the head-hunting line, in his profile it says ooccupation head=hunter,
you should get the line!!!!

Born To Kill 01-20-04 02:46 PM

Hey!

No one's voting!

Get to it people...

We can both return tha favor!

Peace

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LethalNJectionz 01-20-04 04:01 PM

aight... lemme break it down for you all...

punches - btk: you had some hard punches that made me laugh... 007 didnt have as much...

multis - none: didnt see any

flow - tie: both were good

personals - 007: head-hunting and all personal have been played were good... i only saw 1 from btk...

opener / closer - btk: his cemetary was tight and 007's opener was tight... but i was feelin btk's more...

well, this was a good some-what vet battle... nice job guys...

vote - born to kill

peep the battles below...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108207
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108113

...peace

T REX 01-20-04 04:33 PM

well i thought 007 had a bit better flow, and the opener was alright, but thats about all he took, not too much stuff even rhymed, some didnt really make sense, alright punches, personals lacked and what was there was kidna weak

BTK had good punches and pretty good personals, stong open and close, but i wasnt really seeing much of a flow, but other than that it was a real good battle and i give this one to him.

Straight Ace 01-21-04 07:13 AM

Born to Kill
Damn kid, why ya want me ta repeat on ya ass, like pain?
I fucked ya bad before, and now I'm sure ta do it again.
..Soft opener, hoped it would get better
Ya way boring, fact is ya verses have me wantin ta shriek...
1 rhyme from him is duller, than all the newb efforts this week.
..Ok..
And 007 ain't hittin tha pussy, it's like his dick done retired...
If ya held his love life to a mirror, ya'd swear he's a vampire.
Dope..good punch.
Being dumb and witless don't help, kid ain't close ta funny...
But I laughed, when he actually sold his car for gas money.
Slightly funny, a giggle at most though
So go on little Spyboy, take ya wanna be Bond elsewhere...
Ya real job's being a visual aid in geometry, cuz ya so square.
A little old..but still fitting. Set-up showed potential
But it ain't all your fault, bad luck's more than got ya cryin...
007's so bad off, if he owned a cemetary peeps would stop dyin.
..Ok nothin great, not a real strong closer

Double-0 Seven
BTK both your wins an losses are catchin up to your age,
it hard to personal against you, cos they all been played,
..Yes they been played (1st line)
you be out head-hunting?? im thinking prostitues at night,
thats shits unforgivable! point of view taken from ur wife!
Somewhat a personal..under average execution though..
sorry but i know you 'son' the whole of this website,
i win played, i new with hunger!! you past it, u got a spite,
Ok ..Ok
raps pointless, with out geometry, so i rap from all angles,
you could never hold me back, even if i was born with handles,
A little wit. ok..no real punch though
i disable your respiritory system, cause tumours of the brain,
cutting off your hearts blood flow, i split the pulmonary vein!!
Good closer..compared to the rest

I'll give this to B2k for funnier & better punches basically.

LM 01-21-04 07:23 AM

Good battle

B2K - Good funny punches and as usual they were strong.....nice structure and you flowed well. Not that many personals tho.

007 - You came pretty good aswell.....more personals than B2K but less witty and effective punches. I liked the wife line about the prostitute. But needed to make the rest of your lines hit harder.

v/ B2K.........hard to decide but his punches hit harder

Hit up the battle in my sig....only needs one more vote

It 01-21-04 07:45 AM

Damn kid, why ya want me ta repeat on ya ass, like pain?
I fucked ya bad before, and now I'm sure ta do it again.
Ya way boring, fact is ya verses have me wantin ta shriek...
1 rhyme from him is duller, than all the newb efforts this week.
And 007 ain't hittin tha pussy, it's like his dick done retired...
If ya held his love life to a mirror, ya'd swear he's a vampire.
Being dumb and witless don't help, kid ain't close ta funny...
But I laughed, when he actually sold his car for gas money.
So go on little Spyboy, take ya wanna be Bond elsewhere...
Ya real job's being a visual aid in geometry, cuz ya so square.
But it ain't all your fault, bad luck's more than got ya cryin...
007's so bad off, if he owned a cemetary peeps would stop dyin.
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nice nice good werdplay on this one rymescene good 9/10
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BTK both your wins an losses are catchin up to your age,
it hard to personal against you, cos they all been played,
you be out head-hunting?? im thinking prostitues at night,
thats shits unforgivable! point of view taken from ur wife!
sorry but i know you 'son' the whole of this website,
i win played, i new with hunger!! you past it, u got a spite,
raps pointless, with out geometry, so i rap from all angles,
you could never hold me back, even if i was born with handles,
i disable your respiritory system, cause tumours of the brain,
cutting off your hearts blood flow, i split the pulmonary vein!!
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pretty clean cut not bad but 8/10 oerall
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vote/ born to kill for better overall punches and wordplay
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hit this up if you have time and return the favor please thank you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069


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