POLITCAL RAP(peep dis fight for legalizin weed)
 

excuse any mistake i wrote it really fast and dont feel like checkin for fuck up
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I hate this generation
Stop playa hatin kid im losin my concentration
Im waitin for weed to be legal
I wanna smoke it and thats how its gotta be fool
I never wanna quit I wanna ripn toke da spliff
Not for the high but for the gift
Im lifted when I hit it
I admit it its clingy but I realized I can never not hit it, I’ll risk it
I’ll take the matter to the leaders
We’ll see who features the illest rhyme techniques and that’s what weed does
Its gift improves my methods, puts me in heaven judge
Since eleven im been fightin for the right to hold back my grudge
I get in trouble for what I believe in to b the key to my destiny
Thinking jail will get the best they’ll never see less o’ me
Politicians all better listen make weed legal I before start to go ballistic
Mary jane is my doctor I hit it she heals and then I’m gifted
So people all around the world boy or girl
If you believe I believe we can give it wirl

(chorus)So come on raise ya banner and signs its time to justify our rights
Light the ganja light let it rise like day and night
Despite what? That’s right, weed is harmless no need to be alarmed-man
We all protect whats our can we smoke and grow off our-land


It goes way back furthur yall thought
It wasn’t the sixties itiots yall got it all wrong, whats goin on
Don’t stand there like an idiot that’s why we write theses songs
Stand up time “amen” I’ll puff dyin, I’m mary janes destined rap survivor
If I were to agree that weeds bad I’d be a lyer, id rather take your parliament and set it on fire
Back on track to tell a tale
I never would be doin dis if it wasn’t for what im about to tell
Natives for years n years used it the right way, to expand there minds away from night n day
Meditate cuz dey like to pray, they did thins the righteous way
It’s a gift if we use it the right way wit some thought n direction
Don’t need to be smoking n packin a smith n wesson
We use it to improve our ability to dreams more widely
I could rappin bout the president n I’d feel like he’d be right beside me
In a perplex sense of mind some would believe that, for real!
But im looking for answers my self that’s I fight for it to be legal

(chorus)

this should show why weed should stay illegel.cuz its obviosly killed 90% of your brain cells.

:laugh2: ..This was Weak.. :gfy:

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u need some work kid....your flow wasnt good and you need to make your lines more witty...

some of your lines didnt connect or ryhme either
but keep elevating n all

flow was off on some parts and i dont think u gave the subject all it deserves, my suggestion is.. step back and try to go at this issue from a different direction, and come with flow so people dont loose interest fast..