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Maven 01-20-04 05:18 PM

[pre]Kost vs DªÖ
 
Verses Due: Saturday, January 24th 2004
Voting Ends: Monday, January 26th 2004

Topic: Lost In The Flood

Kost 01-21-04 11:36 AM

in this like a mutha fucka

DªÖ 01-21-04 07:01 PM

:.in.:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...931#post1122931
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108529

DªÖ 01-24-04 05:28 AM

some speak a persuasion that ice is a home invasion
devestation, plague to nations with familys open to break-ins
Sadly knowledge does not reach them as they never see
how great a comodity, that the product gives and bothers me
That The lies i hear of my dope being strung around strokes
of depression, sessions of hopeless boats, tradgedies are often wrote
from things u know, but i never beilieved this till a day on the road.


-Stormed out the Screen door Fools bore to love it aint sore
im feelin nothin but anger, fuck rehab, make a stab to the floor
was a gentle patter, but as my nose cleared up it fuckin poured
Comperhensed the tense ways of the core, the reason she alwasy went to the store.-
i never loved her, richies to the hore,but simpy for zero, bored
of the nights, shone lights trough the fights that theres more
then meets the eye, coincidentaly had my little fix to repair the lie
100 scrilla, say goodbye, rehabilitation? thats for the fuckin wise
My Wits begin to faide, old familiar feelings blaze through the wine
As i climb the evolution, too high to die, the road suddenly catches my eye

"Better pool out your raincoat and umbrellas because
its going to be a Very stormy Day, So buckle up and Drive Safe"


was just the boys luck, found out the ladys would be on the bus
clean strut, da dirty sluts went straight to the back and teased lust
he must be a stronger man, destined for a hand in this strand of buety
Shy with every stray glance, he tryed clueing, stance calls for bold movies
Removed from the rest he stood, to take a chance look at a hood
Couldnt be that it should be so close to release some thoughts of good
Fuck that couldnt do anything in the closing moments of death
His shyness overshadowed the swerve to left was so messed
To his right he saw his lovely wife, future with kids, his vission lessed
Too fast to save her, long last to bathe her in love as secured her on his chest
Oh God Please Forgive me'his closed eyes had in common with the tightend Franches


"News Flash There has been a freak accident as so appears
A Reviving Ice Addict lost control of His Car And Swerved
Into On Coming Traffic, Wich Caused a chainreaction, a bus carrying/
High School Students that Smashed into a Truck Barrowling
logs, Saddly at such high speeds these logs became deadly
Here With us from live footage, a sole survior, Franches Medly

"All i remeber is after the swerve being bear hugged by a boy
i allways knew him but never knew him ya know?real nice,
kept to himself. i dont know what got into him, hes always
loookin lost, and blazed look on him like he got lost in a sto-"

"Sad.....Well we have just caught wind that
one of the victems was an alledged crime boss, that controled
much of the crack cociane trafficing"

"Well Janus at least we can pull something outthis tradgedie *hahaha*"
"Yes, and more on weather........"


edit:changed font cuz it fucked up the flow.and i have ss if its gainst rules to edit...sorry didnt know but can check the ss for changes i made. ill host it up soemwhere.

Mr.Christensen 01-24-04 12:29 PM

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Mr.Christensen 01-25-04 12:00 PM

DaO wins


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