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Maven 01-20-04 05:56 PM

[pre]Sureal vs SplitSouL
 
Verses Due: Saturday, January 24th 2004
Voting Ends: Monday, January 26th 2004

Topic: Gasping For Air

Split. 01-20-04 08:33 PM

checking in... Good Luck....

Sureal 01-20-04 08:42 PM

Checking In.

Luck Has No Business Here.

Sureal 01-22-04 07:45 PM

..Flip Clocks, Tick Tock, Time Never Stops..
..Why Skip Talk, When Reality Never Drops?..
..Mindfully Tear, A Heart Baren In Chains..
..As Men With No Fear, Will Feel No Pain..

..There Is Young Man, Not Tall Nor Short..
..This Is How It Began, Not Sweet Nor Tort..
..No Children To Love, Nothing To Relish..
..No Darling To Hug, Life Almost Hellish..
..In Love One Day, Fallen Out Of The Next..
..Hearts Gone Astray, To Beleive In The Rest..
..One Prayer Answered, The Great Love Found..
..Life Flows On, In The Same River He Drowns..
..In Awe Of Beauty, His One Love Not Then..
..Decision To Duty, Overlooked By Most Men..
..Confidence Risen, In Love With Himself..
..Metaphorical Prison, The Hand He Was Dealt..
..Two People Were One, And One Person Less..
..One Person Was None, For He Could Care Less..
..Medication Ignored, For It Was Not Needed..
..Love Of The Lord, Was All For He Pleaded..
..One Day He Awoke, But He Was Not There..
..He Always Leaves Himself, Gasping For Air..

Mr.Christensen 01-24-04 12:18 PM

Quick Reminder: You still have to vote on 3 other battles
Edit your votes into your check in

Sureal 01-25-04 03:05 AM

Getting No Showed Is Dope...

Wasting A Good Verse On Nothing..

-Zone Out- 01-25-04 05:41 AM

^^ I feel kind of the same way..but my verse wasnt good :(...

Bigg E Z 01-25-04 06:15 AM

^ Lol...

All the same Sureal.....Nice work.....

The way it was presented and how it sounded in my head reminded me off Childrens Story.......
Rally nice....

Allso...It was totally off topic, untill the end...

I knew it was coming....But still...Jus cuz the topic was Gasping for air does not mean the whole piece should mention ur gaspin for air...

So all in all, u did stay on topic, Tremendously in fact....
(I know im blabering, and non of u understand..lol)

Split soul - Damn...Wheres is this Mo Fo....

Well...Vote Surreal...






^ All that was SSSSOOOOO pointless..!!

Mr.Christensen 01-25-04 12:07 PM

Sureal Wins


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