mc aines ~vs~ Shenga
 

aight letz do this

10-12 linez

i spit first

i got 30 mins to post and you got 30 mins to post after me

yo

I leave pneumonic distruption as an aftermath from my erruption //
Choken like ya lungs are broken from my outspoken lyrical corruption//
Yur ship'll capsize when my whitecaps'rise an thats when ya rap dies//
I'll send a crippling ripple worse than when fat chicks slap thighs//
This bitch thinks hes so hardcore ill leave stichs all over this whore//
Step up to the fore and expect war hitting you harder than the us marine corps//
With a roar I put you to the floor my rhymes hit harder than thor melting iron ore//
fuck you unstable swingin disabled so you unable to stand like legless tables//
i bust like sable blowin-up like watered down power-cables//
spittin-twistin an hamerin you like nails-in-wood so lets call you screwed//
yo dude i'm leavin ya hanging like old womans boobs in tha nude//

aight :spit:

This newbie has challenged me but see I'm the winner/
I promise not to kill you because your a beginner/
Aight look shenga,I'm sick of weak ass emcess tryin to take my throne/
Leave cats throwed cuz they cant fuck with these lines, unknown/
Just goes to show that dope emcees leave bitches in suspense/
Cuz your rhymes are like your username- it dont make no sense/
Lyrically, I'm spittin the illest shit you ever seen/
Each line's just too obscene, leave you thinkin of me in your dreams/
youre text cant flow, what does that say? i go without flaw/
this little kid couldnt spit dope if he had coke in his jaw/
Cuz I see your're from an unknown place so you aint used to this ill style/
Just take notes and listen closely dawg, teachin you's gonna take a while/

Uppin this actual SHIT 4 votes

letz get some votes for this

my best battle yet :help:

ok my vote has to go 2 MC cause he came a little harder it was still a little bit weak for a battle and both need 2 elevate a little but MC aines took this one by punches and structure and flow, Vote=MC, so can ya'll return the favour and vote for this battle since I took time on ya'llz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108019

letz get some votez i dun want this battle to go to wast tooooo

uppin this shit numer 1...................................

Uppin number 2.......................................

A'ight...

Punches- Aines
Flow- Aines
Creativity- Shenga
Opener- Shenga
Closer- Aines
Enjoyment- Both

Overall- Aines

Fuckin' tite battle...Shenga, your verse was dope...but your structure was wack...Aines got this with the punches...the coke in his jaw shit was ill...no hate...sorry can;t poll vote yet...

Return the favor...thx...

Limited Edition Vs. Hardhitter

..A decent battle...for a noob..Shenga held his own..both of ya need to erase //..that shit just fucks up your flow..Shenga's flow was too basic..punches were lacking...aines..came a little stronger with flow and punches..Vote-aines

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uppin number 3.....................................

ayt this wasnt a good battle and mcaines ur usually ill but not here dawg!!

mcaines won this tho cause his punches hit harder and had an ayt structure

shenga wasnt bad but wasnt really feeling his, ur punches were average ur structure was whack and i didnt really like it!! u need 2 elevate

Shenga did alright for a new cat but you gotta work on ya punches and your meats and things like that. MC you got this one by a nose cause of ya flow and punches. I know ya didn't even try so im not gonna knock ya for that but you won.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108719

VOTE_MC Aines

Opener:Tie, but shenga's was abit stretched!
Closer:Aines
Creativity:Shenga
Flow:Aines
Punches:Aines
Enjoyment:Aines

Vote:- Aines!
Return d favour on my battle please <><><> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106594

aight good battle..hard decision but imma vote for mc cuz he was throwin punches a lil harder thann shenga......
vote=mc
can anyone hit up my battle against yo yo yo