kidaver VS hardhitter
 

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Rules 10 line battle first to five votes win 3-0 ko

ightt drop it and i will have my shit posted..................1

come on son its only lines.......................................*1*

shit im not even gonna come ill on this and ill still beat this lil bitch

ayo
kid face tha facts, aint now way you could have a chance to realisticly son me//
even if you got the illiest rapper to throw your lines like a ventriliquist dummy//

your raps is weak, simmilar to that of an unraveled mummy//
i pack heat in my speech that can leave you gravel to tummy//

no need to spit ill lines, i save those for a geniune foe//
you call those reall rhymes when you know you just pretend you cand flow//

ive peeped your past battles, and know your as wack as a hit from a mafia family boss//
your point you cant get across theres no way you could hand me a loss//

you should not of accepted this battle you still got time for a last minute drop out//
cause once you post your shit youll instantly be handed a knockout//

ightt.......yo im bout to merk you,with the sawed off shootie! pump shoots and take off halfe your fuckin body/
All you see is red with a plug in ya head/
it hurts huh? throw u in a hurst ahh!/
your faker then cilicone titties on a stripper!/
i will cut off your dick like i was jack the ripper,sold it to your mother she feed it to your littel brother/
shoved your nuts down your fathers throte/
he chewd them shits up type quick like he was some kind of billy goat!/
i read some of ya other shit i aint feelin it,like when you fuck ya bitch she aint feelin it!/
and we all know what your going thru cuz u cant flow or rhyme,i heard people rap better fucked up off moonshine/
im gunna stop cuz i think i passed the limit and i think i won this battel dogg just admit it?!..................................

ihgtt lets get these votes in.................................

uppin for votes and i will return the favor...................(shelly)~*1*~

upin..........................#2.................. ..

Breakdown...

Punches- Kidaver
Flow- Kidaver (Hardhitter was all over the place)
Creativity- Uhh...Hardhitter for the fuckin' grossness
Opener- Niether
Closer- Kidaver
Enjoyment- Kidaver

Overall- Kidaver

Hmm...weak battle...but Kidaver got this with the better evrse...you both need to elevate...structure...punches...flow...everythin.. .no hate...sorry can' poll vote yet...

ightt lets get some votes in this mo fo hit it up and the favor will be returend...................1

alright thanx for the vote we still need more its 1-0 me up

uppin #3

we need pole votes...........get um in ight............1

kid daver - weak structure........flow fell off due to ur wack structure.........ok vocab........some multis........basic wordplay.........some of the punches hit hard.........ok personals

hard hitter - wack structure.......flow sucked ass.......vocab was basic........no multis.........weak wordplay........i wasnt really feelin any of ur punches.........weak personals

conclusion - kid daver takes this in every aspect a battle can be judged on.........so he gets my vote

VOTE - KID DAVER

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947

much appreciated.........

yo come on lets get these votes in...................