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Unknown Skillz 01-20-04 08:51 PM

Dynasty Soldiers: Bad Situation
 
Dynasty Soldiers Presents: Bad Situation


Damn I better run cuz I just shot someone in da chest
Police pulled up, took me and put me in their car b4 i could protest
Whent to court,they pressed charges and took arrest
I`m gettin mad at myself and gettin stressed
Say to God, " Why couldnt I have been blessed?"
Then I look back at my Bad Situation
Man Im a bad citizen to my whole nation
Start yellin and cussin in frustration
I never in my life wanted to go to the Police Station
Never thought I could survive behind bars
All dem high gangstaz on the streets smokin cigars
While Im here in this fucked up joint
I would never meet my goals and then I disappoint

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IceMan187 01-20-04 10:20 PM

nice elevation, i think your ready, go try your new shit in frontlines!

Unknown Skillz 01-21-04 07:31 AM

IIGHT Thanks man...........................

Unknown Skillz 01-21-04 07:32 AM

I follow rules, I take orders: That must mean Im a good Soldiers.......LOL

RythmicTendicies 01-21-04 08:05 AM

lol...pretty good...

You had nice flow here, some dope internals which sped it up nicely....you had some good imagry here, told a dope short story..your story-tellin' abilities are improving even though it is a bit of a played out topic...you delievered it nicely..

3/5 keep spittin' that shit.

Penskills 01-21-04 08:21 AM

..decent..for you..better than your other posts I've read recently..


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