Scout This (Triple Threat Hip Hop Head)
 

***In Poetic Style***

INTRO

like jordan in his day or labron in these times/
im the type of cat that produce, scratch and rhyme/

writin was my first love, but it wasnt ment to be/
cuz i got a hold of fruity loops version 2.3/

now that obsession was a blessin but it didnt last too long/
soon i learned by magic how to mix song into song/

there arnt many with all these talents, but if so i'd like to see some/
cuz i could use some more skills to add on my mean ass threesome

LOL .... BUT FOR REAL THOUGH

When I step on the track move back my shit is deadly/
ya come against me ya betta be locked loaded and ready\
im holdin a mashedi--but bring ya firearms on\
lyrics strong like a zorro and smooth like a don juan//
so with two turntables and a micraphone/
i say fuck the studio i make beats at home/
step against me and ima beat ya homes//
my beats like a whole fleet of combs/
get into nappy domes --and they straighten shit out/
so while they runnin through ya head they make ya scream and shout//
my turntable fables like ninja turtles part one\
wax on wax off cuts in between and im done/


i havent been to rb in a long while....its nice to be back .. HOLLA

i liked your verses the structure was good
but this really let you down "my beats like a whole fleet of combs"
return tha favour if you see any of my shit

..what the fuck is up with all these garbage...this was very weak..your structure was all fucked up..get rid of //...your vocab was weak..wordplay needs improvement...