just a quick 5 minute flex {key}(short)
 

I'll try to take advantage of ur smilies lol


Watch yor back, I bust with glocks blazing :shoot:
I bust thru like Triads, *click* I CockAsian
Some punks front me, So I got rapmatic..
I said
"See ya face? :hitit:" they thought i was a faggit
You see, when ya dad drove by he flew..
Cuz when I roll with my crew...
We :roll: bout you
I piss yall off, yet you still wanna linger
Cuz I flip your concepts like middle fingers :flipoff:
Theres 2 occasions when I spit: Its at...
Ripping emcees, and listening to you rap :spit:


will return favors

nice spit good flow hit up my political rap song...
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big up

good flow crap topic go to the w.e.c and elevate

whack....... whats with colouring it up... thats a bit harsh, improve ya flow, carry the rhyming further... and even out the syllable count,... then start expanding the scheme....

Straight dope..your going places..lemme tell ya..heh

LMAO... this was one funny piece, if too short.... you had some very good punchlines and similies in here... lyrically not that strong, but nice poetic elements..... lol.... nice job... made me laugh 8/10