Shenga ~vs~ Positive
 

10-12 lines

i spit

letz go

yo

~Starter~
Piss In Ya Gene Pool....suspend ya carcuss with Deer Hooks...//
In Fear...Shook...U Aint Gettin signed like Retarded Kids Yearbooks :laugh: //

Rappin...you should quit...Ya punches...they always miss.....//
Cause the only shots ya AIMING at, is on ya AOL Buddy List....//

Ya scheme is so fuckin basic... its qualified for MotherGoose... //
battlin' like Vampires in Mirror Houses you won't get the double You//

I guess ur fit for the comp, I punch key's & I land a few //
Whoa!! easy Fag im only grabbin ur ass to hand it to you//

~Finisher~
Left BeatNBattered Ill beat his cracker amist this heap of laughter //
Then Repeat to beat this bastard like whole candy cuz I'm used to eating wrappers //

aight :spit: :thefinger

Sorry dude... work n shit, i had to do a double shift...

aiight, you spat decent... nice

Check it..

I'l step up to the board, this is shengas last 'burn'//
This is a 'heated circular flow' son...'no need for ya next turn'//
You battled me with a 'verse like that', i should show ''concern''//
''The Wackness Emergency Center'' might need someone to ''learn''!//
Your verse should have been 'topical', you could have 'bet'//
'Driving in a hearse' would have been better for 'beating me dead'!// :laugh:
~Drowinig The Lead~
Shenga lost all 'angles' in this battle when he decided to spit a 'circular' verse//
Its not 'sprite' since you spat ''cotton mouth shit''... heres something to 'quench your thirst'//
~Killer~
If ya verse was something, it would be a 'dead battery-part'//
You couldn't get your emcee 'game up off the ground' if I kicked your ass and gave you a 'jump-start'//


sorry again duke... here it is... wheres the votes?

just have to type plenty of charachters so that i can up this thread so thats what i'm doin'...

uppin'~1

uppin .................................................. ...

If I could vote it would be for Shenga...Betters disses,structure,flow....Positive parts of ur verse didn't really make sense and that lost u some points...it still had some nice punchlines but not good enuff
check this battle out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934

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Both battlers were nice no doubt.
But Shenga definately outshined Positive, not hugely, but he did. He delivers classic lines in this one

I guess ur fit for the comp, I punch key's & I land a few //
Whoa!! easy Fag im only grabbin ur ass to hand it to you

definately some nice work.

but Positive is not to be left out, because he spit some nice lines as well.

If ya verse was something, it would be a 'dead battery-part'//
You couldn't get your emcee 'game up off the ground' if I kicked your ass and gave you a 'jump-start'//

I like Shenga's format, because by doing it that way, it forces the observer to pay closer attention to the illnesss of it. It's almost as if they stand alone in the spotlight to be observed.

Excellent delivery on behalf of both of you. And hopefully y'all are pursuing Something on wax as well.