Step~up~if~you~wanna~get~hurt
 

IM TAKIN ANY MUTHAFUCKAS ON IN THIS MUTHAFUCKA I DON CARE HOW MANY POST YOU GOT WHAT YO WINS AN LOSSES IM KNOCKIN SOMEBODY RIGHT THE FUCK OUT.....SO


STEP~UP~IF~YOU~WANNA~GET~HURT get
LEFT CUT BITCH YOU GONNA REP DIRT
when im donE the crowd GONNA be yellin WHOS COUDIE?
WHO DO ME? so BOO RUDELY im 2 SMOOTH G im
BOOZIN my RUGERs IMPROVIN im rapin an CAPPIN
you CRUSIN for BRUSINs you ACTIN im LAUGHIN im
LUBIN ya BOO an im SLAPPIN her ASS an IM SHAFTIN
YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENNED...
IM UNSTOPPABLE
UN COPABLE
you STALKIN lil COCKS
im UNBLOCKABLE
un CHALKABLE
IF werds were PICTUREs
Im UNCROPPABLE
im USIN yo OWN HAND to SHOOT at YOU MAN
>damn< COUDIE CHOOSE TO BRUTE SHOOT AT YO VAN
took the LOOT out YO HAND YO im BOOTIN yo FANS bitch
im POPPin OPERAS an RECRUITIN the BAND this LAND is OUR LAND
GO BACK you show WACK steez my THROWBACKS greesed
YO THATS CHEAP we GO back STAGE we GO BACk STREET
you HALF BEAT my RAPS MEET you RIGHT TO YOUR EYELINE
GUTTIN YOU UP STUCK im FUCKIN YA SKYLINE MUTHAFUCKAS

really really do try an step up and get knocked the FUCK OUT
i can go for days fo days muthafuckas....you DONT WANT IT....

~nope~

um yeh... this should go to open mic, but whatever
lots of anger, what's up with the caps? shut those off, makes me not wanna read it
oh....and up your vocab some....and structure was bad, try to make lines same length
anyway yeh

peace

Fucking don't log on anymore..douche bag..

^^^what he said

I seriously hope he was joking, I mean it could be some diverse attempt at humor.. I would like to think... Well It rhymed... That is all...

theres a major difference between realness and bitches, this dude hes trippin/
while me of all people in this room's suspicious, your ticken my sences like my feets
aching blisters/ invading privacy while im fuckin your sisterz, nutted and luckily missed
her, me too can rap illiterate in wack bars like twista// so trick get a hold on your temper, cuz rappin like that mr. you won't be remembered// _1_ trick bitch

lol...joe set up the battle...if u feel this verse is so nigga nasty use this one...or a written or a freestyle...wutever...i wanna try at u...