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B.I.Detained 01-21-04 04:13 PM

'Volve-Throw Some Out--Mad Flow
 
I was looking through SS wen i saw this..It felt keyed to me but the rawness of it created such a fucking Ill flow, and the description was Emaculate.
I'm not one to Nominate shit but I loved it.

As Time Slips & Each Line Fits
My Mind Grips The Image Of Your Devine Lips
Your Smile's Lit & Bright
So When I Look For It At Night.. I Find It
Its Right.. Where I Left It.. Behind My Sight
Eyes Close Tight .. But Stay Wide Open To You
Been Gone With No Return.. Im Still Hoping You Do
Ive Roped In A Few.. Boo's & Ho's
They Were Nothing So I Didnt Mind Losing Those
Its Like I've Been Moving Slow..
Every Since Your Yes's Began Moving To No's
Still Think About Removing Your Clothes...
Smoothing Your Skin With Its Soothing Tones..
Wish You Didn't Choose To Go..
But You Did & The Choice Was Yours..
I Still Smell Your Sent.. Its Stays Moist In My Pours..
& My Voice Is Sore.. Your Name Stays Repeated..
I Wasn't Blind To Your Needs..
Just To Lame To See Them..
Im Trapped In Shame .. But I Cant Blame Your Freedom
Cause Im Locked Into My Self With A Cage Of Deamons
I Know You Think Thats Strange For A Reason..
Its Not... Inside Me Is Where Your Danger Was Breathing..
You Are Sane For Leaving..
I Came Into It Decieving.. Simply Maimed The Truth
Good Intentions Turned Bad & Aimed At You..
You Had Love In Sight.. But The Game Was My View..
Cause Other Relationships.. Yea, I Arranged A Few
Engaged To You & You Knew.. So I Stayed Accused
Some Rages Flew.. Fists Were Raised & Let Down With Force
Now.. Im Pissed At Those Days & Have Since Found The Source..
Been Around The Courts..
Divorce, Domestic Violence..& Charges Of All Sorts
But... Look At The Cost? I Lost The Only Thing That Mattered
All Because I Had To Be The Boss.. Leaving You Beaten & Battered
I Think I've Defeated The Pattern.. Stoped Cheating & Being A Bastard

Forgiveness Is The Only Thing Im Asking..
Leave The Bad Memories In The Trash.. Along With The Doubts
Cause Lord Knows I Definately Had To Throw Some Out...

rule 01-21-04 04:41 PM

That was a very deep poem. I really enjoyed that piece. I'd say in.
The flow was great. and the picture of emotion was really capturing.
I really enjoyed that.

Great Job.

Feeble Minded 01-21-04 04:57 PM

damn... i always get bored reading peoples pieces but not this time...

vote: In .

Tsar Casm 01-21-04 07:36 PM

Yeah..I did feel that piece..and I would have to say In..

B.I.Detained 01-21-04 08:04 PM

This piece would sound dope Audio
so Evolve
plz put it to a beat

Evolve 01-22-04 11:21 AM

I would put it to a beat if i had audio capabilities.. I have no computer at home so i only use the one at work... Anyway, thanks for the nomination.

Trapt Wit 01-22-04 11:37 AM

Declined!


























Just fucking with ya 'Volve..... I'll read it after work

Evolve 01-22-04 11:49 AM

LOL.. You Bastard ^^^

Evolve 01-27-04 09:33 AM

So i guess the answer is no?

B.I.Detained 01-27-04 12:07 PM

Fuck no....every1 has said yes upto now
RB legend Mods plz peep this
Maven, Chrit, any1??

Feeble Minded 01-27-04 12:11 PM

word, up... mods... appear!

Maven 01-27-04 12:42 PM

My apologies, it's exam time, so I've been studying and the like =)

Mega dopeness Volve =)
In.

Evolve 01-28-04 08:38 AM

Yo .. How the fuck is the dis to Divinity in already.. but this drop aint in?

Im not saying it is the best drop ever... but it is definately better than some that are
in there... especially the Divinity Diss

Aisle Phive 01-28-04 10:31 AM

This was dope, I love reading Evolve's open mics, he's dope at it. This was legendary, the flow was dope, so were the multis, everything and it kept me reading, which is hard to do.

Vote - In.

Maven 01-28-04 01:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Evolve
Yo .. How the fuck is the dis to Divinity in already.. but this drop aint in?

Im not saying it is the best drop ever... but it is definately better than some that are
in there... especially the Divinity Diss



okay, know fucking what?
every fucking time I turn around I hear someone say "why did you put that in!"

well shit!
I'm putting yours in!
I already voted it in! so did everyone else!
I was just waiting on another legends mod!
So stop making me type all these damn exclaimation points!!!!!!!!!


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