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KuRage 01-21-04 05:02 PM

KuRage vs Penskills
 
10 - 20 lines

regular voting rules...

no feeding or biting etc etc

this is not my check in...

Penskills 01-21-04 05:04 PM

..Check~Check~~~WTF? you mean ^ that is not your check in??? LOL~~

KuRage 01-21-04 05:06 PM

i dunno... lol... just making sure u checked in first... go ahead and start keying ur verse..

ALSO: time limit is 2.5 hrs from check in... peace

Penskills 01-21-04 05:28 PM

This rhyme battlin' ain't happenin' like watching syndicated Re-Run episodes of black shows
You couldn't blow up with the shit you spitting in front of flames, like alot of these other ASS-HOLES
Verbally handling ya, massacared , and brutal perceptions
Just when you thought you caught the jist of it, I've made an interception
I'm unpredictable and unstable
Sodomize with vicious lines that'll send your gay-ass where your dad couldn't take you
Ripping your script and use it as my cogradulatory parade conffettii
Waving at your bitch ass, my prederatory gaze is steady
I'll spit lead into your jeep and leave you sleeping at stop lights
Forensics wouldn't blame me, they'll put Suge under some spot lights
You probaly act Hood,when only hood you've been in is sweats and drawsrtings

KuRage 01-21-04 05:34 PM

~Curtains~

Penskills is trying to Rap with Heart but KuRage's ..Eating his Vitals..
When you holler "Hi IQ" it's just a way of ..Greeting your Idols..

You Wear your Mind on your Sleave but you're ..Topless..
You Speak Wise? -- Nah, You're only a Smart Ass who ..Talks Shit..

The only Brain he's Getting differs from what Clinton ..Had in his Office..
He's not In my Way, Penskills is merely Preliminary to the ..Battling Process..

How's he going to come with Heat if this Sell-out's Wearing ..Nothing but Ice..
Easy does it.. This battle is a Piece of Cake, An I'm ..Cutting Precise(ly)..

I can spit Sporadic -- This hereby states the ..Demise of his Pattern..
And to Contradict a Common Cliche -- ..Cise Doesn't Matter.. (Size)

A CV Member? I never knew we had such a ..Fascist in the Guild..
Who's blaming? This Arrow (->) only points to the ..Status of Your Skill..

This story is Mine as it's Told -- And there's no ..Lies that I Wrote..
Honestly...The Arrow (->) merely refers to his ..Side of the Road..

He tells me he comes with No Game? --True, he's ..Too Lame..
Penskills? I'm just showing you the Battle Algorithm of your ..New Name..

You Hear these Severed Bars? --Viagra? He's ..Rarely Ever Hard..
State your Claim as "This is what I'll do to you", but ..You was never Sharp..

With Hatred I'm Rushing-- Oh I'm sorry, this cat's ..Saying he's Something?..
KuRage > Penskills -- His occupation states he's ..Greater than Nothing.. (Yale Dropout)

~Curtains~

the '~Curtains~' do not count as lines and i posted exactly 20 lines...

Daz 01-21-04 06:28 PM

nice battle..however i think ima go with penskills on this..both had nice punches..still penskils seemed like he edged over on this battle..very close battle though..kurage really surprised me here..his cypher sucked but his verse was dope...much respect to both..

v/penskills

hit it up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108617

dizzy hommel 01-21-04 06:37 PM

Penskills came alot harder and conected more with his punches!Kurage u were ok but Penskills had more talent and ifelt his verse more!
v/Penskills

Hitta 01-21-04 06:44 PM

penskills had better punches and came a lot hardder all hands down skills took this!!/
my vote-skills
hit my battles up..............*1*......................

Street Champ 01-21-04 07:07 PM

Aight, both was cool, but Pen was spittin ish like he wrot that and couldn't wait to use it on someone. But over Kurage got his ass beat wit them punches, KO bitch. Post that shit. Go and vote on my battle

Penskills 01-21-04 08:35 PM

..Uppin.............1
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Xpress Lane 01-21-04 10:01 PM

Very good battle, especially for the front lines. I had to think about this one for awhile, and I gotta give it to Pen. Don't think of this is as d/r vote, cause he took a shot at me while voting in my battle. Lol, you fucker.

Kurage- it's a shame your verse will go down the drain, cause you could've slaughtered alot of people with it. That's what you get for not battling newbs.
"When you holler "Hi IQ" it's just a way of ..Greeting your Idols.."
"You Wear your Mind on your Sleave but you're ..Topless.."
"Easy does it.. This battle is a Piece of Cake, An I'm ..Cutting Precise"

All dope lines. Nothing wrong with your verse, Pen just came harder.


Pen- Yea, I agree with the guy who said you prewrote this, but that doesn't really matter to me. All of your lines were right good and every punch hit.

Overall very enjoyably read.

Penskills 01-21-04 10:01 PM

......uppin,,,,,,,,,,,2
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..Leave a link...I'll get at ya...

~Yo What Up~ 01-21-04 10:09 PM

penskills - ok structure........flow fell off some..........vocab was tight.........multis were ill.........good wordplay.........ya punches landed hard.........ok personal

kurage - good strucutre........flow was pretty good.......vocab was ok.........multis were ok.........wordplay was a lil weak.........some of ya punches were good........weak personals.......

conclusion - penskills takes this in multis, wordplay, and punches, so he gets my vote

VOTE - PENSKILLS


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