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Shenga 01-21-04 07:38 PM

Shenga ~vs~ faireinhight
 
aight 10-16 lines

i spit first

letz do this

Shenga 01-21-04 07:58 PM

yo

This bitch~aint~winnin...it must be the "pearl~harbor" attack the way ur ships~is~sinking
I hold so many verbal~armor call me 'gun~lord' while ur shit "runs short" like a midget~sprintin

Ur scared of failure so u keep ready~flows that make no~sense...ur illicit~ways~r~on~the~brink
when my deadly blows commence like vivien leigh yull~be~gone~in~the~wind
(first line im sayin hes got prewritten shit...2nd line: vivien leigh - main actor in the movie gone with the wind)

At many~places I brutally~mutilate mcs like this with enve~n~hatred not leavin any~traces Cruefully~boot~this~fake...who~knew~im~straight cos with this battle I take a stand against gayness

Its like i'm spitting lava how I got hot n jagged~flows thats why im leading~this~heat
I aint even feedin~off~this~geek but comin off heavier than when fat~joe is beating~his~meat

The only way ur lips carry sick shit is when ya kissin~girls with herpes extant
Ur punches were like comets missin~earth the way they didnt hurt~me and didnt land

aight :spit:

FairInHeight 01-21-04 08:56 PM

First off you ain't a gun lord, you gunned down, shenga a.k.a. the shunned clown/
all that shines on ya head be the sun crown, deadly to front now, ain't heavy ya 1 pound/

another example of a wack mc's threat, if this is pearl harbour i'm a japanese jet/
i don't battle a geek, i attack a reject, why you testin the best, showin lack of respect/

yo your vocals they, the loco, simplest, the same as all, saying homo hence a diss/
I'm here to leave yoshi clenching fist, he green, growing off others, he photosynthesis/

U best give up, you've lost your honour, you know for a fact that you'll walk, a goner/
you make cheesy beef, like taco toppers you still couldn't flow if you talked in water/

This the point you crazed n hysterical, what a laze, i'm amazed how your errorful/
face it, i'm made to win, fair wit flow, this ain't the first time i beat you, i played u in mario/

FairInHeight 01-21-04 09:00 PM

uppin for votes, sorry for the long wait, my moms was getting me to take in groceries

Penskills 01-21-04 09:08 PM

..can Shenga possibly get his sixth loss of the day????...Nah~you lucked out..your flow was actually better than fair's(amazing isn't it???)..both of ya had some fucked up structures..Shenga stop writing long ass verses..no one wants to read that shit~~~Vote-Shenga...

CAMROK 01-21-04 09:25 PM

are you kidding me... I actually liked Fairs verse.. was penskills reading the same battle??

Yo, Fairs owned this thing... here's my explanation (even though i can't poll yet)

Sheng.. first you gotta stop this ~~~ it was hard as hell to understand anything.. structure was bad, flow was ok I guess.. had some ok punches but seriously gotta elevate. Fair had a nice verse.. killed u with his punches.. more creative.. better flow.. that's all, my vote would go to Fair.

vote- fair

Shenga 01-21-04 09:59 PM

thanks for the votes

uppin...............................

Shenga 01-22-04 01:06 AM

uppiiiiinnnnnn

lets get some votes on this one i dont want this battle being slept on :help:

FairInHeight 01-22-04 04:31 PM

uppin yo wehave to votes, and one hasn't even been voted
so uppin

FairInHeight 01-22-04 06:53 PM

............................uppin for votes, come on, please vote

Shenga 01-22-04 11:46 PM

uppin this battle please dont let this be slept on

eclipse_one23 01-23-04 10:14 AM

oh seeeit my man shenga got this

95 % dissin
5% killin da bars



keep ya head up G
~one~

Shenga 01-23-04 11:08 AM

Thanks for the votes but we need some poll votes

uppin...........

yungthug619 01-23-04 11:41 AM

shenga, aight verse, decent punches, could
of done better i think, flow was good, structure,
you need to work on it.



fairinheight, good verse, good punches, you flipped
that pearl harbor line on him, i think that was dope,
good flow, went good togetgher, structure wasnt
the best, but good enough to get this, and that fat
joe line was funny, good job dawg keep elevating.

vote:fairinheight

yungthug619 01-23-04 11:42 AM

return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109111
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