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Iiiimmmmmm Bbbaaaccckkkkkk!!!!!!!!
Aight im back in dis bitch, Check it out
Im not the dying kind, Unless I get this chunck of mine, Imma keep holdin the mic, Never press rewind, I dont like to view greatness more then one time, So lay downt the beat and let the diamonds shine/ Brush me off, Clean me up, Tip my cup, Cuz I always stay in and leave you wit a cough/ Never bust a gat wit a pop cuz I aint into violence, What I really need in this life is some guidance/ Get the fuck off me,I may be white but dont take me softly, I climbed the mountain and kept it rocky/ Kept with the music when times was hard, Been through some ruff shit, But never got scared/ I take a good look around and what do I see, A bunch of phoney emcees followin me/ Im drownin in G's, And swimmin in bucks, Failin in life cuz I dont give a fuck/ If I die tomarrow then you would be glad, Remeber your the reason I died, Aint life sad/ I could care less about school, And less about women, It just always seems there always grinnin/ Lookie Lookie, Pickaboo, You think you crop this quick, Cant top this spit, Cock this shit, Walk in the dark like a topless bitch/ Man you never even nearin lyricest, Alls you doin is hearin this, Cuz all I do is drink beer and cryst, Use my fist, To bust up lips, And leavem all with lisps, And fuck some crisps, While you eat some dicks/ So gimme a notepad and a pencil, You ask for what? So I can make an appointment, To steal your weed, And then roll an joint wit it, Man I got some advise for you 3 blind mice, Stop, Talkin, Shit, Robos gettin real frustrated, More then Clintin did with that cuban immigrant, I keep my shit white like plastic and crack, Pile cats up like vlasic stacks, A passive act, Like a white boy behind a gat/ What the fuck you thikn your gonna do, You aint got balls, Your pussy threw and threw/ Ill get back wit my links later, What You Think???!!!???? |
M.C.BARTOK;ever since that bitch m an m came out all you dumb honkies sound the same. i got an idea for a movie you can star in its about a half man half robot whose a cop.
the name of the movie is metal cop. im russion your white im black your white i eat shit you grub on chees my rymes are tight your ass aint , the only ride you goin on is the big black dick ride you white she devil, russions dont like honky american girls who rap like m and m and are afraid of eating shit. dont be afraid it taste good it feels good ah hold up i just got paged by my boo, his name is anthony and hes a hella fine transexual lady. peace cake boy |
it was an ok verse but work on ur vocab flow was good though and structure was ok
work on vocab and elevate |
yo dat waz good needz work on vocab and struture but only a bit read mine
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need more feedback please
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