Brethren vs. Kaos Theory
 

House Rules
10-16 lines
Due Saturday (1/24/04) midnight

Good luck

Are you gonna check in??
I'm only battling if theres blind spits

sure, pick a time .

Make it due in a half an hour
Haven't started yet so.. thats sounds reasonable

Alright, due at midnight .

Flow? Brev.. you couldn't feel a beat.. if it pinched ya skin
..Ya 8 miles from talent.. you're even hopeless in Michigan
Don't front..
Tha only time ya seen pussy.. is coimg out ya moms cunt
A lil sleepy? Brev's had that battle with Danksta for a month!
Late for school?kid.. you got tha wackness center to attend
My spits are at Wits End
But this n00b's verse has -~""**""~- and slashes at tha end
Wack,n00b,Herb..thought for a while..
.................................couldn't describe you any other way
Brethren of Hitler?cuz he was Protestant.and he turned out gay
Ya full of gas fag..You're a lightweight and ya always been light
I Threw pencils in Brev's eyes.. & still didn't have writers insight
Looked wack as fuck in bitchslapped..& thats tha way u still apear
2-1?not much skill reflects there..so I'll make ya rec look like a mirror(2-2)
Lmao.. Can tell you a herb by ya actions.. let alone by ya words
Cuz you on ya knees more.. than ppl with strong faith in a church

Kaos dazed, I'm warpin-vision like hes in the 'House of Mirrors', seeing circus-midgets,
I pummel him to worsen-conditions, haha, really 'take the edge off', like circumcisions,
This battle is just like Pee Wee Herman, you taken a 'beating-for-fame',
I'll see-that-your-maimed, lethal injection while you 'pleading in vein',
You the Kaos Theory? You hear a 'Big Bang' from me, just to prove your uncle-wrong,
Fucka-gun, I'll 'rip the barrel' straight out, and throw it at you, like Donkey-Kong,
I'll shit on your verse, all damp and wet, so now all you got is miniature-'dews',
Kaos, bitch still a virgin, he's got 'stickier fingaz' than Winnie-the-Pooh's,
Haha, still 10 years old in mischief, somebody get this 'minor-off-fences',
Kaos is just sick enough to get me to sneeze, or was that sinus-congestions?


If you don't get the wordplay, don't vote, must have 150+ to vote.

Uppin for a vote maybe?
Or even maybe five...
Just vote you lil a-holes!
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kaos good 1) 2-1?not much skill reflects there..so I'll make ya rec look like a mirror(2-2
great line vote-kaos

Read voting rules. Vote gone. -Token

alright........................................bat tle

punches:brethren
flow:brehren
personals:brehren
others:none


kaos most the time you lines didnt even go together
it didn't have a good flow at all.

brethren nice flow, went good together, your intro was dope
dawg keep up da good work.

since i took da say what i think, vote on any of my battles, piece.

uppin for votes #1
(Reall get your weak-ass outta here)

Kaos - You came pretty good, nice punches and the odd personal. Flow coulda been improved but it didnt effect ya that much. You were quite creative and came good.

Brethren - Ok....nothin special. You threw the odd god punch but didnt hit as hard as Kaos Theory. Flow was Ok but in some places fell off a bit. Overall not too bad but elevate

VOTE - KAOS THEORY

I cant poll yet but drop an honest vote on my battle...links in my sig

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If you aren't gonna vote, then why even post in somebody elses battle?

Uppin #2