C-Saw diss
 

Well just thought I'd sum feedback. New to this rap thing, been rappin since september and I wanted to know what ya'll thought of this diss.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/twest2004.htm

Recorded live.

can i atleast get one reply...lol, i know it was bad...BUT THAT BAD!?!?

lol, dayum, i scared ppl away.

uppin for atleast one...i repeat...one review...

beat was garbage just for poor quality
Voice is more clear then the beat
You bit a NAS line
Not cool
Punches where cheesy
Longing for improvement bro but you will only get better
One should hope
Ive only been doin this since about september too
check my shit out

Hit me up on my message board

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/t...sticatmusic.htm

note a few things before posting feedback.

1) it was recorded live so obviously my voice is going to be more clear than the beat.
2) Punches were all personals, which I am guessing philosopher did not get any of.

I would also like to know where is this line that I bit off Nas. Wow, I didn't even know I did, point it out for me please.

Remember, this is what you call *recorded live*, note how I say it in the first post.

YOUR A SLAVE TO MY RHYMES----idiot
Recored live? so the beat was through mic, I guess u can call it live---fuckin dummy
Yes your punches were very weak
move on fromit kid you wanted feed back and you got it

everywhereeee we goooo people wanna knowwww whooooo we areeeee soooo we tell them...

yeah real bad quality man....dont record the beat and the spit at the same time...get cool edit..record over the beat...

lol..lil jokes in thur'.....delivery a lil off..the flow was iiight....its jsut u gotta space the words better...like when to START the next bar..or half of the bar....

not bad for a frist attempt..ive heard real bad so this isnt that bad

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^yeah what he said..my first attemp on recordin omg.........so good for first try....