LudaCris: The trail of life
 

Its the feeling you get
in the pit
of your stomach
that aching pain
like flying rain
its the lightning
its frightning to know
that your on your own
broke...
alone...
your a joke
you have noone
no life
but still you strife
to be the best
higher than the rest
but then death
you fall
never to get up again
and that is that.

give me some replys you guys asap please.

or email me at diablo_z_sof2@hotmail.com

thanks guys

That woz ok, but ya need to elevate. no hate tho!!

elevate? elaborate plz

go here this will help!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=55

thx man, my 1st u c im a bit rusty

callin out ludacris bitch ass
 

yo battle me now unless u scardtake da loss like a man :thefinger :evilgrin:

so am i

come on dawg wat u scard

this was good for a newb, had a good sence of where you wanted to go...i think you should try and think a little more about your lines cuz you had a great idea just didnt finish i thought...keep at it..you can only elavate

come on bizmark!
 

Come on man il wipe da floor wit you. you name da place and il kick da crap out 'o' you lyric.

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