exorsist
 

yeah heres another special

you neva wanna mess
cuz the best dont mess
yeah i killed ya crew dont stress
what u a boy ya wearin a dress
i got more,u got less
you a little bitch ya so annoyin ya make my blood itch
i m gonna kill ya like the exorcist
im gonna kill ya till ya sole no longa exists

it was ok for a beginner, try to change the structure and use better vocab and wordplay. peace

4 Words rhyming, .. at the start.. bad vocab usage, bad content, it was short..an ok flow, .. but this was useless, sorry.

everything about that piece was basic
and lines were too short
but youve only just joined so youll learn
put out some more open mics and when u get feed back it will help u elevate

shit now read mine

yo guess hu it is i go 2 ur skool saw u makin dat shit up 2day c'mon u can do betta make it longer look at mine 2 its preety crap

peace FROM FATTY M*TT*