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exorsist
yeah heres another special
you neva wanna mess cuz the best dont mess yeah i killed ya crew dont stress what u a boy ya wearin a dress i got more,u got less you a little bitch ya so annoyin ya make my blood itch i m gonna kill ya like the exorcist im gonna kill ya till ya sole no longa exists |
it was ok for a beginner, try to change the structure and use better vocab and wordplay. peace
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4 Words rhyming, .. at the start.. bad vocab usage, bad content, it was short..an ok flow, .. but this was useless, sorry.
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everything about that piece was basic
and lines were too short but youve only just joined so youll learn put out some more open mics and when u get feed back it will help u elevate |
shit now read mine
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yo guess hu it is i go 2 ur skool saw u makin dat shit up 2day c'mon u can do betta make it longer look at mine 2 its preety crap
peace FROM FATTY M*TT* |
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