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R*O*B*B* 01-22-04 05:38 AM

exorsist
 
yeah heres another special

you neva wanna mess
cuz the best dont mess
yeah i killed ya crew dont stress
what u a boy ya wearin a dress
i got more,u got less
you a little bitch ya so annoyin ya make my blood itch
i m gonna kill ya like the exorcist
im gonna kill ya till ya sole no longa exists

Lyrical_Sniper 01-22-04 05:41 AM

it was ok for a beginner, try to change the structure and use better vocab and wordplay. peace

Edicius 01-22-04 06:11 AM

4 Words rhyming, .. at the start.. bad vocab usage, bad content, it was short..an ok flow, .. but this was useless, sorry.

code-187 01-22-04 07:17 AM

everything about that piece was basic
and lines were too short
but youve only just joined so youll learn
put out some more open mics and when u get feed back it will help u elevate

w_n 01-22-04 03:42 PM

shit now read mine

rasta_masta_247 01-22-04 05:03 PM

yo guess hu it is i go 2 ur skool saw u makin dat shit up 2day c'mon u can do betta make it longer look at mine 2 its preety crap

peace FROM FATTY M*TT*


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