Help me elevate please
 

I'm not the worst but want to elevate.....got any idea's.
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..Your punches were very weak...structure seemed okay...no personals..flow was decent..I think you'll get better with time..

dawg work alot on your punches and come really hard 2 everyone newbs and all cause some newbs r aliases and r really vets and pros so work on your punches and you'll be there dawg iight, welp elevate dawg

try to add metas and personals into ya punches.. they make them more compex

see feebles thread about personals