First few audios
 

Aight im new to this, so dont be a twat, constructive critism would be good :thumbup:

check: Fuck you, To sarah and Quick verse. ignore the battle.

www.soundclick.com/Poseidon

Drop a link and ill get back to you.

pz

Im Listening to "To Sarah"...

Iight, I like this beat. You got soom presence on this, but no emotion. Sounds like its read of your paper. You should really have more emotion on this, since its a dedication track. Need to pronounce some shit better. I like the concept, cant hate on this kinda shit. Im gonna have to play one more time to get some quotes..."carrying joy and pain", "ocean of emptiness", "pain once endured, now death has cured"- dope. Nice concept, needs some work though. Get a little more amp'd up, pronounciate better. Other than that and some production flaws, good track....

btw- thanks for the feedback on my track....

Not bad for an english rapper
check this shit out


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108834

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