Who Fucking Cares . .
 

Jesus Christ,
Why The Fuck Do I Try . .
I`m Not Perfect
At Being The Perfect Kind Of Guy . .
And It's Not Purpose
That I Have to Sit Here And Lie
So Fuck It- Listen
I`m A Failure To Life . .
But Who Fucking Cares,
Not You Not I . .
& I`m Sure If I Had A Tear To Shed
I'd Cry . .
But I Can't, Give Me A Minute
I Know You Dont Give A Fuck
But Listen . . Then it. . .
I Know You Want Me To Cry A River . .
. . So You Can Drown Me In It ..
But I`m Missin You Right . .
I Know You Don't Want To Hear This . .
But Who Fucking Cares, Shit
I'm Missing You In My Life . .
But Who Fuckin Cares, Bitch . .

Fuck if it sucks, I`m audio, done this out of boredom

=] woooooooooooooooooooooooooord

nice line with the cry a river and drown me in it. nice post

haha, read the first lines and knew u were audio. I will give you my honest opinion. For a text piece, it sux. But now if it were an audio, I could see sumthin pretty good comin along der. Got the whole kinda Eminem Image "Fuk life, bla bla bla". Well, atleast ya tried, turn it into an audio.

Kool piece....interesting.......nice post..........

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i agree for a text peice it aint too good... aint gonna bother explaining cos youll probably already know... but i suppose you did this to a beat.. and would probably go well if i knew it... so what else can i say... i could see it expanding to a decent verse for open, but a the minute it jus isnt there....

I put this to a beat and it was actually really good i thought..some lines i thought were creative like the river one...i liked it also..it was short an sweet..for an audio head..this was a good quick text piece...peace