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DNUFO2 01-22-04 04:41 PM

DNUFO2 Vs. Young Savage
 
Ok I'll go first. the usual 10 lines thing

DNUFO2 01-22-04 04:50 PM

So some say i need to elevate/ ok, now i've gotta chance, so let me playa hate.
I'll kick this guys ass worse than Slider's/ He's too young to be a serious fighter.
he says he's a savage so I gotta watch out/ One time He pulled down his pants/
but no dick fell out/ He thinks he's gotta punch like Mike Tyson/ I'll bite off his ears
and say i'll eat his son/ Quit trying to battle you stupid kid/ There's only room for one/
So don't try to kid/ I gotta throw a punch/ open your paper bag and find a knuckle sandwich in your lunch. i'll stop this rhyme scheme pretty soon/ It'll only end with me eatin dinner and you in the spoon/ can't u see stop tryin to rap/ go sing some R & B.

Young Savage 01-22-04 05:19 PM

You not serious...ok mabye you are if thats ya spit....LET THA PAIN BEGIN...!!!

Kats who say yo need to elevate "Ain't Lyin", niggas who read ya shit hope you "Ain't Tryin"/
Should i spit hot for this wack emcee?...i don't even know why i'm replyin/

*Turn Up Tha Heat*

"Blazed-Wit-Smoke" just a "GAG" or a "PRANK" cuz "DNUFO2's-a-JOKE"/
Got a "Gage-n-Colt cuz ya punches like "Injured Athletes", just "PLAYED-n-BROKE"/
I'll take advice from ya "Sig" and "Rock 9 in Ya Dome" with the "Trigga-I-Stroke"/
This is a "Lyrical Beatin" my bars leave you like "62 Year Old Smokers"..."Coughin-n-Weezin" you know "Hardly Breathin"/
Since I already won this battle i'll give ya a rematch once your rhymes "Done Teethin"/
The flows sick *AACCHOO* look its got me "Sneezin"/

*A Simple Finisher For This Wack Emcee*

I "Called-Ya-Bluff" your below "Light Weight" your just a "Powder Puff"/
Your what rap used ta be "Plain-n-Simple"...you spit antique...ya belong in the "Attic" with the "Christmas Stuff"/

yungthug619 01-22-04 06:02 PM

best battle ive seen so far, im suprised.

ima give this here to savage.

savage, you had some good punches, i liked your opener
it was dope, you had better structure, and good flow,
heres a tip, you need some more personals dawg.

dnufo2, pretty good too, decent punches, could of done better,
you had pretty much the same as him but his lines were better.

sorry, but i cant vote yet, since i took my time sayin what i tought,
hit up any of my battles.

Polled. -Token

M&rk 01-22-04 06:39 PM

u obviously aint read any of my battles both was weak. first dude's rymes were way too white. and the others too black, shit dont make much since ta read too many ""/ shit. if savage had a finisher he woulda easily won, my votes still for him but only cus u goin agianst whitey, chummon son... if u want a real battle call me out
vote savage

DNUFO2 01-22-04 07:25 PM

vote..............................................

Cata_Strophix 01-22-04 07:29 PM

i'm say it like this

if this is the Dopest Battle youve ever read ----then your fuckin wack ya self

complete merkin by young savage'''''''''''str8 up

he had better personals punches ---his shit flowed like pussy juice------and it was better worded with a much better vocab


Vote--savage

Shitty vote = Gone -Token

DNUFO2 01-22-04 08:29 PM

I would but I don't have 100 posts................

Ven0m 01-22-04 08:37 PM

If I could vote it would be on savage..good disses and nice structure and this is no d/r vote because i voted for dn on another battle...ne wayz peace..and if u guyz have time check this battle out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934

Fo-Real 01-22-04 09:14 PM

savage killed this guy clearly better punches he actually flowed ufo you should stick to rock and drop the hole rap thing playa it aint workin for ya and pictureperfect two's rhymes are week ass shit

DNUFO21 01-23-04 12:51 AM

moderators piss me off............................

Young Savage 01-23-04 01:19 PM

ok....were still uppin for votes please...........!!!!

Kautious 01-23-04 01:25 PM

vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107921



Vote:savage


he had it taken from the start with punches, dnufo2 you neede to aim more shit to him not at yea self

svage your wordplay and strucutre took this

from begining to end, work on yea flow and yu should be aight

murdoc 01-23-04 01:34 PM

probably 1 of the worst battles ive ever cum across i think savage had a couple of attempts at punches but hey ull both get there in the end keep tryin

Young Savage 01-23-04 10:00 PM

^^^ sure this was one of the worst battles you ever seen...but i look under ya name and it says "NEW TO RB" so who tha fuck are ta me???...ok....were still uppin for votes please...........!!!!


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