screemin 4 more
 

alrite dis is me 1st rap
i no its probly crap

wots up wid u me nigger
wot u stupid shud of pulled da trigger :shoot:
but u didnt no i was fukin ur whore :hump:
fort u wud of herd her beggin n screemin 4 more
see look now ur on da pill
all because u missed 1 kill

most of ya neva herd my shit
o well duz it look as if im carin just a tiny bit
take da piss ill shoot da shit out of u :shoot:
thn get ur mom 2 eat da fukin shit right out of u
this song is not about u
just 1 silly little rap
but dont worry there will be more dan that :cussing:

needs more work on vocab and structure but good flow

o well ill get betta

yup throw some creativity in tha thang.Most people sound simplistic their first time (except for me i came out the womb ill i was battling the other sperm for survival)

Bad.












You Needa Work On Everything, But You Gotta Start Somewhere...You Need To Have Creativity And Flow, You Had None WhatSoEver. Lengthen Your LInes, But Dont Have Them Strechted!!!!

Overall- 2/10, Dont Worry, You'll Get Better....I Think..

Hmmm...This might be garbage of the week....