tryin'....
 

what the fuck was you thinkin
listenin in on me when im speakin
u just done fucked up ya weekend
look at me again and youll be permenatly sleepin
cuz imma giva ya what i got
nevermind, all i need is one shot
ya got an X on ya forehead cuz it marks the spot
so here meet me and this is my glock
mother fucker i spit on u
ya prolly wish ya had the flu
i can see ya scared
knowin what im bout to do to you
just turn around and walk away
before my homies roll up and spray

just tryin' to do somethin decent i cant write that emotional stuff like some ppl can so just tell me and ya think...peace

for some one who can write emotional peices this was actually alright man...ya structure could use some Work but That Will Come as u see more Open Mics...ya flow was alright...if ya add some multis in there it would be really nice....If ya can could ya LCheck out My Open Mic In My sig and return the Favour Man....Keep Elevaten....PeacE....