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AJ 01-22-04 10:09 PM

AJ :vs: Amp
 
Yep

10 Lines
No crew, hate, d/r votes
No feeding
No biting
Etc...
You spit first

I might drop tonight, but I got limited time, if I don't then it will be tommorow, if that's aight, so peace and goodluck.

Amp 01-23-04 03:46 PM

here, I'ma start typin' now

ten lines right, yep okay well I'll start now then, this is my el checkalone in

Amp 01-23-04 04:06 PM

oh god you gotta be kiddin' me

let me fix this......

here

Aj lets get somethin' straight, lets just say i won and there'll be no debate//
Limitin' your time now you late, pissin' me off ain't good on your side of fate//
Your Avi's already sayin' how you lookin' up to me, and you need some help//
You're tryin to hard, you're brain is swellin under the pressure and splittin' ya scalp//
Stick this under ya belt, as a loss that you "could of had" and lost anyway//
Tellin' you if the polls get reset and you lose I'll battle again on any day//
Let Aj come back to the streets and see how we do it like men and not boys//
For the record kid lets see Us how we R and take away all these fake toys//
Screw this, I'm takin' this too easy, we need to step it up and put forth an effort//
As far as you may your bars come weak, letters come crooked, skills come short//

Fixed it for you. -Token

Amp 01-23-04 04:10 PM

alright, well that bolding thing backfired but just so you know above the word toys, boys should be bolded as well, Aj I'm waiting on your spit

AJ 01-23-04 06:55 PM

Amp your out of time, lay back and learn to rhyme
If ya want a witty punch copy my spit line for line
He couldent get his spit right the first time he tried
Don't squeal just cuz you a fat ass getting hog tied
My name is AJ can't you even read what is written?
Evidently not, or you wouldent even have spitten
Ya chickend out at about 12:41 and now you here
Leave ya record like your sig, scortched and seared
Kids gonna be asking what your structure all about
But remeber dude, Every Amp will soon blowout...

If you don't get the closer then don't vote.
If you don't get the 12:41 then don't vote.
Basically, if you dno't get the punches, don't vote.

Good spit Amp, but dude your really nead to learn to keep those lines even.

AJ 01-23-04 06:57 PM

Well actually let me explain the 12:41 or no one will get it. At around 12:30 pm last night we agreed on a battle and thne he said he had to go to bed. Alos notice in his location the #'s add up to 1241.

AJ 01-23-04 08:23 PM

Alright people, come on now, please don't sleep on this battle, I hate it when this happens.

1st Uppin for some votes.

BaNE 01-23-04 08:35 PM

flow/structure-aj
disses/personals-aj... that closer was best line in the battle by far
punches/wordplay-aj
multis-neither

overall-aj

sorry i don't have enough posts to poll vote..
peep BaNE vs Dizzy Hommel

AJ 01-23-04 09:23 PM

Thanks for the vote, but I need poll votes to win this, drop your links not just saying who you battled, to hard to find.

2nd Uppin for some votes.

BaNE 01-23-04 09:25 PM

my bad... i prolly should have figured to put the link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109037

Phillie Blunt 01-23-04 09:25 PM

this battle was really bad.I mEan honestly>Niether Of You really had alot good shit. in fact alot of it wasn't even remotely decent. but overall im gunn go wit AJ.. even bars and i could understand what he was saying here

v...AJ

Shitty vote gone -Token

The Jett 01-23-04 10:05 PM

punches AJ
flo AJ
structure AJ
wordplay AJ
multi's Amp
meti4's Amp
personals AJ

vote- AJ
seriously, amp u gotta change ur style...this site has changed...u have to also...AJ basicly dominated this thing wit very harsh personals even tho he fed that double spit line.....still AJ was better all around

Read rules, vote gone.

TheUnderRated 01-23-04 10:30 PM

check it i give this to Aj for better punches amp punches were just like childish...the wordplay using backstreet and boyz to men and toyz r us....it was pointless because it had nothing to do with your verse so in order to make it fit you ended up fuckin your shit up......AJ not a hard drop from you...few punches and even less personals you won but really not by much don't underestimate kids or you might get fucked....check it....peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109265

AJ 01-23-04 10:40 PM

Oh 3-0 I am getting all tingly inside. Anyways, thanks for the votes guys, I am getting to the link right now UnderRated.

3rd Uppin For Soem More Votes

AJ 01-23-04 11:11 PM

Man, alright I get a good stream of votes going and thne they stop, please don't sleep on this people.

4th Uppin for some votes.

Actually this is your last up. Read rules. -Token


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