Writer's Block
 

what's on my mind, i dunno do you? i'm confused
i can't rhyme, what to do...my mind's been used
it's all blank, my mind is empty to the tilt
it's like i tipped my head over and my brains spilt
man i got writer's block, i know that's what i got
i'm in the light, but i'm not in the spot?
man this shit, isn't it a little confusing
i pick up a pen, but i ain't using

um yeh i dunno
freestyle type poetic type thing......
yeh
peace

meh....not really feeling....

not any umph to it...

but if u see the beauty in it then all power to you...

thats all that matters...peace

This wasnt really poetic at all.
Sorry to say....

not poetic at all u should have posted in open mic,
still its ok,work on vocab though
best 2 lines "it's all blank, my mind is empty to the tilt
it's like i tipped my head over and my brains spilt"

hit up my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195

meh, what can ya do,