Wackness(keystyle, platnumberg battle)
 

It's funny to see how much time you've wasted//
Talkin' feeble-minded, inadequate gay shit//
Can’t seem to grasp these implacable rhymes//
Lyric’s get under your skin ‘ n’ send shivers down your spine//
Your mind frame diminutive through your idiosyncrasies//
Thoughts must be crafted by childish tendencies//
You’ve gotta educate the mind, re-evaluate the process//
Your mind becomes dence and my scheme is relentless//

Yea it's nice little keystyle... Good vocab, and good rhyme scheme. Pitty it wasnt a little bit longer tho

- 1d

im feeling the keystyle a tad bit.. it's nothing i really wanna hear but ovarall your rymes are tight. and like the kid above it shoulda been a little longer but..oh well nextime huh?

topic was wack but the flow and vocb was good
nothing original

it was wack and what was the point of posting a 5 bar peice??? elivate