Why is life like this?
 

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CHORUS
Why is life like this?..Just a million struggles
Gettin through the day brings a million troubles
Then U start to think of the inportance of existance
And tryin to get money to pay rent N dividends
x2

Verse 1

Babies being born addicted to crack..Where's the love?
Puttin children lower in Ur thoughts..Second 2 drugs
I don't know how I should feel..I feel disapointed in U
That U could want these chemical rushes injected in U
I know life gets hard and every step is a challenge
But it doesn't mean that you have to fall to the syringe
Cos the drugs don't work..They just make you worse
Til the day of the Judgement..Taken out of the hearse

CHORUS
Why is life like this?..Just a million struggles
Gettin through the day brings a million troubles
Then U start to think of the inportance of existance
And tryin to get money to pay rent N dividends
x2

Verse 2
Are U really pregnant...Is there a way that U can be sure?
4am..Teenage girls start to bang up on my front door
Did you take the test?..Makin sure that the claims ain't fake
Maybe she's lyin to get a piece of my estate,piece of the cake
I don't know..Can I rally Trust her?Thoughts start to race
Maybe I can leave tonight..Without leaving a single trace
I'd rather face what I've done..Be a father..Do the right thing
But if I find it's another man's..I'll have to get on that fight ting

CHORUS
Why is life like this?..Just a million struggles
Gettin through the day brings a million troubles
Then U start to think of the inportance of existance
And tryin to get money to pay rent N dividends
x2



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jus to warn u...I ain't know no smack monsters N I ain't got no one preggers..
Just a topical awareness piece

an ok piece, good message but didnt flow too well,
" I know life gets hard and every step is a challenge
But it doesn't mean that you have to fall to the syringe"
elevate.

Yeah that was allright nice topic and u brang it out quit nicely although u could have made youre flow a buit better, there was a few quotables in there but u could elivate to somone good, keep writing