Lue Cypher's On Board
 

I use to run on a different site... diff. crew... had diff. beef... coming here and start`n ova... check my style lemme know what you think...

Wanna test the Paradise, ya best think twice/
Get ya mind right, or ya life'll be the price/
Wit a swift knife swipe, or a microphone devise/
We rock ice, throw dice, and drop nyce on a mic/
Heed thee advice or end up behind my precise sights/
I'll make ya see the light, or INS-da-Don might/
Slice ya wind pipe, while Blood digs out ya wife/
We ain't afraid of a knife fight in broad day-light/
Would never recite what another man write, but MOBB might/
Even Killa Seven been known to bite like a dust-mite/
At least Deadly been forthright, A~S~K is all white/
Like the backseat-boys, only guns theses killers got be toys/
It's G-O-P, -AND all you COWards just can't stop these BOYS/
We like the bullies in the court yard taken ya lunch money/
Shit`n on all you Free.Style`n flunkies, turned text junkies/
We smack`n that ass red like spider monkees/

Paradise = old crew
Blood, INS = crew mates

No One Can Read The Print In Your Post Thats Probably Why You Havent Got Any Feedback

looks straight now rite?!

..this was elementry..LOL~~~keep up...

still light shit, but you can come by an drop a tryout for dynasty and see wat happens

Good flow...

Blah as hell content, though.

Gangs, net-crews, whatever.

Seriously, what the fuck ever.

But you got talent, just need to direct that at real, meaningful and fuckin interesting topics.

No one here gives even half a shit bout ya old crew and peeps we don't know.

Utilize wordplay, ya got ya metas down...

But wordplay needs to be incorporated.

Peace

good looks on the honest breakdowns... keep sum of that shit in mind.

1 Open Mic Per Day....Follow The Rules.